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Letter
Dear Clara,
How are you? I am very well fine and I am writing this letter for to tell you something about of me. I' m an university's student, I'm twenty and I love many things!
I've played volleyball for until six years. It started as a for hobby, but it became a passion! I played in different positions roles in the last few years, but this season I didn't play often to much because I'm very busy at for the university and I hadn't time for the training; as so I didn't play to much in this championship, but it isn't a problem. I use the volleyball to for relax my mind, when I play I don't think about anything else at nothing, only at the game!
Although I also love to read! I read my first book when I was ten, and until since then that moment I haven't stopped been stopping! I read more lots of books, of many genres; gender, thrillers, love stories, and fantasy. In that moment I'm reading two books at the moment; 1984 of by George Orwell and Impero, of by Alberto Angela. The first is a big global classic of the global literature, the second is a report of the a Roman's Empire hero te by Alberto Angela, Alberto Angela is the most famous researcher of the Roman history in Italy.
And you? What's your passion?
Letter
Dear Clara,How are you? I am very well and I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I'm a student at university, I'm twenty years old and I love many things!
I've played volleyball for six years, I started as a hobby, but now it's became a passion! I played as different roles in the last years, but this season I didn't play to much bacause I'm very busy with the university and I hadn't time for the training; because I didn't play to much in this championship, it isn't a problem. I use the volleyball to relax my mind. When I play, I think of nothing but the game!
I also love read! I read my first book when I was ten, and since that moment I haven't stopped! I read many books, about gender, thrillers, love stories, fantasy, etc. Right now, I'm reading two books; 1984 by George Orwell and Impero by Alberto Angela. The first is a great classic in global literature, the second is a report of the Roman Empiror Nero Te by Alberto Angela, the most famous researcher of Roman history in Italy.
And you? What's your passion?
Letter
Dear Clara,How are you? I am very well and I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I'm an university's student, I'm twenty and I love many things!
I have played volleyball for six years, it started as a hobby, but it became a passion! I have played in different positions over the last few years, but this season I didn't play too much because I'm very busy with university and I haven't got time to training, so I didn't play to much in this take part in the recent championship. However it isn't a problem, I play the volleyball to relax my mind: when I play I don't think about anything, only at the game!
Although, I also love to read! I read my first book when I was ten, and since that moment I haven't been stopped! I read more books of many genres; thrillers, love stories and fantasies. At the moment I'm reading two books; 1984 by George Orwell and Impero, by Alberto Angela. The first is a great classic of the global literature, the second is a report about the Roman's Empire era te by Alberto Angela, the most famous researcher of the Roman history in Italy.
Letter
Dear Clara,How are you? I am fine* and I am writing this letter to say something of me. I am a university student. I am twenty and love many things!
I began volleyball six years' ago which I started for hobby but it became a passion! I played in different positions of late, but this season I didn't play too much because I'm very busy with university work and I hadn't time to train. As I didn't play too much in this championship it was not a problem. I use the volleyball to relax my mind and when I play I don't think about anything, only at the game!
Although I love to read and read my first book when I was ten, and since that moment I haven't stopped! I read many books of many genres; thriller, love stories, fantasy. Right now, I'm reading two books; 1984 by George Orwell and Impero, by Alberto Angela. The first is a big classic of world literature, the second is a report of the Roman Empire era te by Alberto Angela, the most famous researcher of the Roman history in Italy.
And you? What's your passion?
*fine, like living and dead has no attributes. One is not very, a little... living or dead. Likewise with fine.
Very well written! Don't get too depressed with 1984. Orwell is depressing!
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