4/23/2016
On an arm chair in a dimly lit living room, sat a man. Only his outline was visible in the darkness. He slightly swirl the wine glass in his hand, the dark red liquid stirred in his glass. He gently stroked the hair of a black cat with another hand, which lying quietly on his laps. The cat occasionally opened its eyes lazily and blinked. Suddenly, the stillness of the air outside the window was jolted by the shirks of bats, and the sky was filled with the black shadows of the bats that soared into the starry night sky.
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4/23/2016
On an arm chair in a dimly lit living room, sat a man. Only his outline silhouette was visible in the darkness. He slightly swirled the wine glass in his hand, the dark red liquid stirred in his glass. He gently stroked the hair of a black cat with another hand, which was laying quietly on his laps. The cat occasionally opened its eyes lazily and blinked. Suddenly, the stillness of the air outside the window was jolted by the shirks shrieks of bats, and the sky was filled with the black shadows of the bats that soared into the starry night sky.Good job!
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