could you correct my post please.Many thanks in advance
Good day to you!
How are things? What's the weather like?
Over here, it's warm and sunny but anyway I am feeling a bit cold all the time. I am so cold sensitive woman.
I gave birth on the 4 of April. My baby is 4 weeks premature. My waters broke unexpectedly. I think maybe it is curry which was very hot to eat because one woman who was in a ward with me also went into labour shortly after eating spicy curry like me.
I spent a week in hospital as my baby son has a jaundice.
I like maternity unit as all midwives and staff were friendly and sympathetic.
Since the birth of my baby I have had sleepless nights but in the whole he is very quiet child only crying and making fuss if I wash him after he pooes. He doesn't like to be washed and starts crying till he is dry and in his grow ups.
I hope you are doing great and looking forward to good news from you
Keep in touch
I will try o keep in touch but must warn you that from my experience with my daughter when baby grows they become more demanding sleep less and keep you very busy.
Have a good week.
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could you correct my post please.Many thanks in advance
Good day to you!How are things? What's your weather like?
Over here, it's warm and sunny, but anyway, I am feeling a bit cold all the time. I am so sensitive to cold.
I gave birth on the 4th of April. My baby was born 4 weeks prematurely. My water broke unexpectedly. I think maybe the cause of my premature delivery was my having eaten very hot curry, because another woman who was in the ward with me also went into labour shortly after eating spicy curry like me.
I spent a week in hospital, as my baby son has a jaundice.
I like the maternity unit, as all the midwives and staff were friendly and sympathetic.
Since the birth of my baby, I have had sleepless nights, but on the whole he is a very quiet child, only crying and making fuss if I wash him after he poops. He doesn't like to be washed and starts crying until/till he is dry and in his grow ups. [?? 1]
I hope you are doing great and am looking forward to good news from you.
Keep in touch.
I will try to keep in touch, but must warn you that from my experience with my daughter, when a baby grows he/she becomes more demanding, sleeps less, and keeps you very busy.
Have a good week.
[1] Sorry, I'm not familiar with "grow ups". In the US, we have a product call "pull-ups" which are for very young children, but not for newborn babies.
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could you correct my post please.Many thanks in advance
Good day to you!How are things? What's your weather like?
Over here, it's warm and sunny, but anyway, I am feeling a bit cold all the time. I am so sensitive to cold.
I gave birth on the 4th of April. My baby was born 4 weeks prematurely. My water broke unexpectedly. I think maybe the cause of my premature delivery was me having eaten a very hot curry, because another woman who was in the ward with me also went into labour shortly after eating spicy curry like me.
I spent a week in hospital, as my baby son had ajaundice.
I liked the maternity unit, as all the midwives and staff were friendly and sympathetic.
Since the birth of my baby, I have had sleepless nights, but on the whole he is a very quiet child, only crying and making fuss when I wash him after he poops. He doesn't like to be washed and starts crying until/till he is dry and is in his grow ups. [?? 1]
I hope you are doing great and am looking forward for good news from you.
Keep in touch.
I will try to keep in touch, but must warn you that from my experience with my daughter, when a baby grows he/she becomes more demanding, sleeps less, and keeps you very busy.
Have a good week.
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