Bank for rent
It’s a sign of our times. Where a short time ago there was a bank, today there is a dollar shop, a mobile phone shop or a cafeteria. Or, in the worst-case, remains an empty commercial office with an advert to sell or to rent it. It’s enough to go for a stroll to the city centre of my town to run into the reality: a lot of commercial offices that just some years ago were banks, stay today vacant waiting for an business owner who turn on a store or other kind of business. But time is going by and more of them are in the same way. Closed.
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Bank for rent
It’s a sign of our times. Where a short time ago there was a bank, today there is a dollar shop, a mobile phone shop or a cafeteria or in the worst-case, remains an empty commercial office with an advert to sell or to rent it. Going for It’s enough to go for a stroll to the city centre of my town is enough to run into the reality: a lot of commercial offices that a few just some years ago were banks, stay today remain vacant waiting for an business owner to start who turn on a store or other kind of business. But time is going by and more of them are in the same state way. Closed.0
Thanks to both. I've been thinking about the full stop colon in the last sentence: You are right, Terry.
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Hi Manuel,
I agree with the corrections made by Karen and Terry. Overall very good with only minor corrections:)
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Hi Manuel. Karen's comment is accurate... just a few minor changes needed. In the final sentence use a full stop colon to announce the "closed" aspect. "But time is going by and more of them are in the same state: Closed."
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