life is a journey

From hell to heaven,
There's no starting way to walk.
Sometimes up,sometomes down.
Hope creates a heaven for us,
Despair makes a hell for us.
Some choices are waiting for me,
Which one one is better?
No God in the world can help me,
Choosing is the byname of freedom,
Different choices make different futures.
It's stupid to put eyes on others.
I have to make up my own mind,
Going my way to the destination.
Facing succes or failure,
There's  no need to care too much.
Only if I've tried my best,
It's enough for my simple life.

I just fix a few things to make it more readable, i tired no to change things if i didn't think it needed to be changed. I don't want to mess up your idea and intention. Good job