I try to write about my lesson yesterday
I spoke with lynne about her town. I read than her town it’s very small, only live 658 people. We had been seeing for google maps the town and I could know where she lives. She showed me her apartment. For me was amazing saw than these town look like square it’s perfectly organized.
She said me than Shipshewana is in the country of LanGrange in The United Stated and then LaGrange is the county seat of LanGrange County. I asked she if in Shipshewana live Latin-American people and she said me than not only work but live in other city near.
She showed me the one restaurant call “El Zorrito 2” surely it’s a Mexican restaurant. The Owner is a Mexican call Camelo, He is from Acapulco and live in The united Stated since he was 16 years old. He is married and has four children. For Lynne is very funny to hear Camelo talk in Spanish with his cooking (lalo) because they talk like Cantinflas.
I like so much the session with lynne because all time talk about the normally situation and she is very funny.
I would like than you tell me about my errors of I can correct them
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I try to write about my lesson yesterday
I spoke with Lynne about her town. I read than her town is very small, only 658 people live there. We looked at the town on google maps so that I could see where she lives. She showed me her apartment. It was amazing for me to see that the town is perfectly organised in the shape of a square.She said to me that Shipshewana is in the country of LanGrange in the United States and that LaGrange is the county seat of LanGrange County. I asked her if Latin Americans live in Shipshewana and she said to me that they both live and work in a city near by.
She showed me a restaurant called "El Zorrito 2”, surely it’s a Mexican restaurant. The owner is a Mexican called Camelo. He is from Acapulco and has lived in the United States since he was 16 years old. He is married and has four children. It's very funny for Lynne to hear Camelo talk in Spanish when he is cooking (lalo) because they talk like Cantinflas.
I really like the sessions with lynne because we always talk about everyday things and she is very funny.
I would like you tell me about my errors so that I can correct them
Good writing, I changed some bits to make it sound better in English. Some points you use the word than instead of that throughout the text. Than is used when comparing things for example I am taller than my sister it can't be interchanged with that. Careful with the difference between subject and object pronouns. She is a subject pronoun i.e. it's the subject of the sentences so they represent somebody doing something. Her is the object pronoun I.e. the object of the sentence which means that something is being done to them.
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I spoke with Lynne about her town. I read that her town it’s very small, only 658 people live there. We saw the town on Google Maps and I was able to know where she lives. She showed me her apartment. For me it was amazing to see that this town looks like a square, it’s perfectly organized.
She told me that Shipshewana is in the county of LaGrange in The United States and that LaGrange is the county seat of LaGrange County. I asked her if Latin-American people live in LaGrange county and she told me that (not only work but live in other city near) I don't understand this part.She showed me the one restaurant called “El Zorrito 2,” surely it’s a Mexican restaurant. The Owner is a Mexican called Camelo, he is from Acapulco and has lived in The United States since he was 16 years old. He is married and has four children. For Lynne it's very funny to hear Camelo talk in Spanish with his cook (Lalo) because they talk like Cantinflas.
I liked the session with Lynne so much because we talked about normal situations during the whole class and she is very funny.
I would like than you to tell me about my errors so that I can correct them.
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