The last week between April and May T_T
So my childhood and best friends's birthday is on 28 -4 and 1-5 and another friend's birthday is on 29-4
The problem here mainly considered as my brook :'( I am totally run out of money . The second problem is I don't know what should I give my best friends as a gift :/ I want something special specially one of them is going to graduate after almost month so I want something make her remember this year even after 25 year ^^
Any suggestions?! &don't forget to correct for me . Thanks for helping me to improve my language ♥
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The last week between April and May T_T
Well, my childhood and best friend's birthday is on 28 -4 and 1-5 and another friend's birthday is on 29-4The problem here is that I am broke. Yes, :'( I have totally run out of money . The second problem is I don't know what should I give my best friends as a gift :/ I want something special especially as one of them is going to graduate after almost one month so I want something to make her remember this year even 25 years' later ^^
Any suggestions?! &don't forget to correct for me . Thanks for helping me to improve my language ♥
Generally well written, but maybe your 28-4, 1-5 could be clearer.
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Thanks ^^
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I will write out the sentences that need corrected:
So my childhood friend and best friend - rather than just childhood.
The problem here, is I'm completely broke! I have totally run out of money. The problem is I don't know what I should give my best friends as a gift. I want something special, especially as one of them is going to graduate next month, so I want to make it something memorable this year, even after 25 years.
Your paragraph is good. I don't know how to use the correct function on this, with my iPad as its a bit confusing. Only very minor mistakes made, and no one would be confused as to what you were trying to say, except with the sentence about graduation.
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