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Do you agree that people who live in urban areas can take better care of their families? Part II In addition to educational opportunities, people who live in cities have access to better health care facilities and better doctors. The hospitals in the cities are equipped with much more sophisticated medical equipment than hospitals in rural areas. There’s a general consensus that people who live in villages have less health related problems than the ones who live in the cities. The term “health” is most of the times associated with physical health, but I would like to put mental health into perspective. According to a recent study in Iran, the rate of depression is higher in villages than in cities. The study suggested that, now that people have easier access to information they are more exposed to the urban lifestyle than before, and consequently they get bothered by social gap that exists between them and middle class people who live in cities. To conclude, based on the arguments explored above, although life in the cities is not as peaceful and simple as the life in the villages, the benefit of opportunities that cities provide for its citizens outweigh the problems of the urban lifestyle. I believe it is fair to draw the conclusion that due to the wide variety of educational and health care facilities that exist in cities people can better take care of their families.

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In addition to educational opportunities, people who live in cities have access to better health care facilities and better doctors. The hospitals in the cities are equipped with much more sophisticated medical equipment than hospitals in rural areas. There’s a general consensus that people who live in villages have less health related problems than the ones who live in the cities. The term “health” is most of the times associated with physical health, but I would like to put mental health into perspective.

According to a recent study in Iran, the rate of depression is higher in villages than in cities. The study suggested that now that people have easier access to information, they are more exposed to the urban lifestyle than before, and consequently they are bothered by a social gap that exists between them and middle class people who live in cities. 


To conclude, based on the arguments explored above, although life in the cities is not as peaceful and simple as the life in the villages, the benefit of opportunities that cities provide for its citizens outweigh the problems of the urban lifestyle. I believe it is fair to draw the conclusion that due to the wide variety of educational and health care facilities that exist in cities, people can better take care of their families.

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