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I was back from Nagoya. I went to Nagoya for neck treatment. I wake up am 6:30 and took a bus from am 7:00 to pm 13:00. I arrived at a hospital and treated for 1 hour. I didn't know the effect of neck treatment. But I liked the hospital's treatment policy. it fits my health policy. I will go there once a week until I treat my neck. I hope to treat it and proceed my good future. Thanks. :)

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I was came back from Nagoya.

I went to Nagoya for neck treatment.
I woke wake up am 6:30 and took a bus from am 7:00 am to pm 13:00 pm.
I arrived at the a hospital and was treated for 1 hour.
I didn't know the effects of neck treatment.
But I liked the hospital's treatment policy. It it fits my health policy.
I will go there once a week until I treat my neck gets better.
I hope it will get treated soon so I can get on with life like before. to treat it and proceed my good future.

Thanks. :)

Hey good work! just a few small errors but well written :) hope your neck gets better! 

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I am back from Nagoya.

I went to Nagoya for neck treatment.
I woke up at 6:30am and took a bus from 7:00am to 1:00pm --- (If you are using a 24 hour clock, you do not use AM and PM )

I arrived at the hospital and was treated for 1 hour.
I didn't know the effect of my neck treatment.
But I liked the hospital's treatment policy. it fits my health policy.
I will go there once a week until my neck is treated. 
I hope to treat it and proceed with a good future.

Thanks. :)


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Wow! I hope you are okay! It is good to know you are being treated and that you like your hospital.

Get well soon! 



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