My last vacation I wanted to tell you about my last vacation, I live in Mexico city so I decided to go to the state of Queretaro, this state is nearly from mexico city, approximately to four hours, t

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My last vacation I wanted to tell you about my last vacation, I live in Mexico city so I decided to go to the state of Queretaro, this state is nearly from mexico city, approximately to four hours, the place who I visited was a village called Tequisquiapan that is famous for his vineyards, I went to a vineyard called “La Redonda” and enjoyed it tasting a good wine and a delicious cheese, the only thing which I don´t like was that the plantation didn´t had grapes because the season is until July and August. I recommen if you will come to mexico, you have to visit Tequisquiapan because is a magical village.

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My Last Vacation

I wanted to tell you about my last vacation. I live in Mexico City so I decided to go to the state of Queretaro. This state is approximately four hours from Mexico City. The place I visited was a village called Tequisquiapan that is famous for its vineyards. I went to a vineyard called “La Redonda” and enjoyed it tasting a good wine and a delicious cheese there. The only thing that I didn´t like was that the plantation (vineyard) didn´t have grapes because the season is not until July and August. I recommend that if you ~~will~~ come to Mexico, you have to visit Tequisquiapan because is a magical village.

My last vacation

I wanted to tell you about my last vacation. I live in Mexico city so I decided to go to the state of Queretaro. This state is nearly from mexico city, approximately to four hours away. The place who I visited was a village called Tequisquiapan that is famous for his its vineyards. I went to a vineyard called “La Redonda” and enjoyed it tasting a good wine and a delicious cheese. The only thing which that I don´t didn't like was that the plantation didn´t had have grapes because the season is not until July and August. I recommend that if you will come to mexico, you have to visit Tequisquiapan because is a magical village.

Good job. A vacation with wine and cheese definitely sounds like fun.

I think you had very nice vacation! I not be sure, but I think you have a mistake on beginning your text because you talking about your vacation in present tense, not in past. I don't know at grammar very well, but I think so. My english isn't very good and this is my debut. I never wrote with anyone in English because I very ashamed. In my opinion writing text of this type is very amplifying to language skills. Write me answer what do you think about this.

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