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After work I'm going home right now. I drank them after I finished work. It crowned by train when I'm gong home.

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After work

I'm going home right now. I had a drink with some friends after work.  The train is crowded.
I drank them after I finished work.
It crowned by train when I'm gong home.

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After work

I'm going home right now.
I drank with them after I finished work. (Them? your friend? work colleges?)
The It crowned by train was crowded when I'm I went gong home.
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"I'm going home right now" is ok, but the other two sentences are hard to understand. Did you go for a drink after work? Was your train crowded? "Crowned" does not make sense, I guess you mean "crowded", which you can use (as an adjective) to talk about a train with many people on it. The verb "to go" can be "go, goes, going, gone, went", but not "gong". "Gong" is another word, I don't think that's what you mean.

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