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Why do I want to learn English? Hi to all the people! Today I want to talk you about which is my main reason to learn English! First of all, I really love it. I know that I have to improve all my skills on it, but it is just that challenge which make me feel good and make me to have an extra-motivation. Secondly but no less important, I would love to work in UK in the future! I was in London and it was an incredible experience for me. I loved the atmosphere that you can breath there. A lot of people of all the cultures around the world... and many opportunities to meet them and why not find a great job. I have just finished my degree in mechanical engineering and I'm wishing to improve my English and to have the enough skills on it to go there and find out a good job for me, as engineer! In addition, English will help me to know better the United Kingdom culture, that it's something cool for me. Futhermore I would love to have the enough skill to understand the films in English Version without any subtitles! I love watching films in my free time! Well, that's all for today! See you on my next notebook! Thank you, and I hope to not have done a lot of grammatical mistakes!

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Why do I want to learn English?

Hi  everyone!  (it sounds better like this) Today I want to talk you about which is my main reason for learning English!

First of all, I really love it. I know that I have to improve all my skills on it, but  the challenge makes me feel good and it gives me to have an extra-motivation.

Secondly but no less important, I would love to work in the UK in the future! I was in London and it was an incredible experience for me. I loved the atmosphere that you can breath there. There are people from all over the world from lots of different cultures, There are lots of opportunities to meet new people and good employment prospects. I have just finished my degree in mechanical engineering and I'm hoping to improve my English and be fluent enough to enable me to find out a good job for me, as an engineer!

In addition, English will help me get to know better the United Kingdom and its culture better, that would be something cool for me. Furthermore I would love to be fluent enough to understand the films in English Version without any subtitles! I love watching films in my free time!

Well, that's all for today!

See you on my next notebook!

Thank you, and I hope to not have done a lot of grammatical mistakes!

RED = corrections. Don't worry about the corrections it is very well written and easy to understand, I have changed it sound more natural.


Well done

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