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Hello!
I want to tell you about my favorite music. I love the Coldplay so much, I think their songs are very beautiful and melodic. Well, also I like to listen to a classical music; Tchaikovsky, Borodin, Chopin etc., especially love so much 2 Concerto number 2 in C minor by Rachmaninoff.
I'm going to the ballet to see Tchaikovsky's "The Nutcracker" on the 4th of May. So I often go to the Novosibirsk Opera and Ballet theatre.
This is our Opera and Ballet theatre.

Lovely write up, with a few minor erros. With adequate practice, you will improve. Great job! =)

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Attempt at Writing. Day 8, English

Hello! 
I want to tell you about my favorite music. I love Coldplay so much, and I think their songs are very beautiful and melodic. I also like to listen a classical music, such as Tchaikovsky, Borodin and Chopin. I especially love Piano Concerto No. 2 in C minor by Rachmaninoff. I'm going to the ballet on May 4th, Tchaikovsky’s The Nutcracker. I often go to the Novosibirsk Opera and Ballet Theatre, which is our main opera and ballet theatre.
 

проба пера. 8 день. английский

Hello!
I want to tell you about my favorite music. I love the Coldplay so much and I think their songs are very beautiful and melodic. Well, I also like to listen to classical music: Tchaikovsky, Borodin, Chopin etc. I love the 2 Concerto c-moll Rachmaninoff so much.
I'm going to the "The Nutcracker" ballet by Tchaikovsky on the 4 may. So I often go to the Novosibirsk Opera and Ballet theatre.
This is our Opera and Ballet theatre.