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I wrote an email to dear Dan today. Dear Dan, Long time no see. How are you? I'm doing well in Chengdu, sunny day today. So glad to hear from you, darling, I thought I send a email to you probably 1 month ago, I miss you so much but I can't contact you and I'm very worried about you, I've asked MiaoSa, she said you are probably traveling. Since I am a Monkey in the Chinese horoscope, this is my big year seems like I'm one of the lucky one's. But, I've got a terrible chronic antrum gastritis in this January, and I take Chinese Traditional Medicine all the time. Fortunately, the herbs is quite effective. Meanwhile, I can never taste strong flavor food in Sichuan. I'm working for a coffee store in Chengdu with my boyfriend Dylan. Learning how to make coffee and Latte Art is funny and I've learned a lot of from it. Also I do CrossFit training sometimes here, as the weather will soon get warm. How's your home the SpringField? There is a big news in my life, I'm preparing for the International English Language Testing System(IELTS) in order to get the Working Holiday Visa(WHV) to go to the New Zealand two years later. My English move backwards since I leave America, the IELTS is really hard for me like CrossFit, but that's the only way for me to go to New Zealand on the cheap. Have you ever been to NZ? How about it? Will you come to Chengdu in May? So sorry I'm not in Hunan, if you come to Chengdu, may I make a cup of coffee for you? What kind of would you like? Tell me and let me practice more form today.:) Hope you everything goes well, talk to you soon! Bear hugs and kisses!:) Yours, Taylor

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I wrote an email to dear Dan today.

Dear Dan,

Long time no see. How are you?

I'm doing well in Chengdu, It is sunny today.

So glad to hear from you, darling, I thought I would send you an email, probably 1 month ago. I miss you so much but I can't contact you and I'm very worried about you, I've asked MiaoSa. She said you are probably traveling.

Since I am a Monkey in the Chinese horoscope, this is my big year. Seems like I'm one of the lucky one's. But, I've got a terrible chronic antrum gastritis in this January, and I take Chinese Traditional Medicine all the time. Fortunately, the herbs are quite effective. Meanwhile, I cannot taste my food.

I'm working for a coffee store in Chengdu with my boyfriend Dylan. Learning how to make coffee and Latte Art is fun. I've learned a lot of from it. Also I do CrossFit training sometimes here, as the weather will soon get warm. How's your home in Springfield?

There is a big news in my life, I'm preparing for the International English Language Testing System(IELTS) in order to get the Working Holiday Visa(WHV) to go to New Zealand two years later. My English has become worse since I left America. The IELTS is really hard for me like CrossFit, but that's the only way for me to go to New Zealand on the cheap.

Have you ever been to NZ? How about it?

Will you come to Chengdu in May? So sorry I'm not in Hunan, if you come to Chengdu, may I make a cup of coffee for you? What kind  would you like?
Hope everything goes well for you. Talk to you soon!

Bear hugs and kisses!:)

Yours,

Taylor      Note from Ted A very good letter. I would suggest that some of what you said could be taken out, and your message would be more powerful because sometimes, less is more.

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