would you tell me about yourself?
my name is Jayden Choi I am 30 years old.
i majored in theater department.
I live in seoul with my family. My hobbies are singing the music and playing games on computer.
i'm very friendly and considerate. i have good singing the music skills.
i am going to work for self business with my friends. maybe we are going to cleaning business.
I rellay hope so grow up my english skills
how can i do this?(that?)
also .. I looking for using english friends...;;;;;;;;
bye bye!!
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would you tell me about yourself?
My name is Jayden Choi. I am 30 years old.I majored in theater department.
I live in seoul with my family. My hobbies are singing the music and playing games on the computer.
I'm very friendly and considerate. I have good singing the music skills.
I am going to work for self business start my own business with my friends. Maybe we are going to make a cleaning business.
I rellay really hope so grow up to increase my English skills.
How can i do this?(that?)
Also .. I am looking for using English friends...;;;;;;;;
Bye bye!!
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would you tell me about yourself?
my name is Jayden Choi I am 30 years old.i majored in theater department.
I live in seoul with my family. My hobbies are singing, listening to music and playing games on the computer.
i'm very friendly and considerate. i have good singing skills
i am going to work for my friends who set up their own business. maybe we are going to begin a cleaning business.
I really hope i can improve my English skills,
how can i do this?(that?)
also .. I looking for help from english friends...;;;;;;;;
bye bye!!
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