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My weekend Well, I spent a great time with my friend in the camping on weekend. On Saturday, I got up very early in 5:00 AM. I took brush teeth very quickly. Because I am car sick, so I have to cook something to eat to drink medicine. After finishing all of that, I took motobike to come to rendezvous. When I came, everybody was talking together. The leader decided to divide 3 groups, one group 12 people. We will take on 3 car. We played a game call "cryptogram". We have to find the cryptogram to know the place we will come. The first cryptogram we found that the first rest stop to take breakfast. After eating breakfast we find the second cryptogram, it is a mountain. well, when we come here we have to find the third cryptogram to know who will guide us climb the mountain. Actually, this is a natural mountain and the first time we come here. So no one know the way to climb the mountain. Finally, we find the cryptogram. It takes two hours to go up and go down the mountain. Everybody was very tired after climbing the mountain. And finally, the last place we find in the cryptogram is a beach. We get in the car and go ahead the beach. Everybody feel happy when go to beach. We really have a great time on weekend.

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My weekend

Well, I spent had a great time with my friends in the camping during the weekend. On Saturday, I got up very early in at 5:00 AM. I brushed my teeth very quickly. Because I am have was car sick, so I have I had to cook something to eat to drink medicine so I could take my medicine with it.. After finishing all of that, I took motorbike to come to rendezvous to rendezvous with the others. When I came arrived, everybody was talking together. The leader decided to divide us into 3 groups one group of 12 people. We will take 3 cars. We played a game call "cryptogram", where we have to find the cryptogram to know the place we will come need to go. The first cryptogram we found that at the first rest stop. After eating breakfast we find found the second cryptogram, it is was a mountain. well  When we arrived there, we have had to find the third cryptogram to know find out who will would guide us in climbing the mountain. Actually, this is It was actually a natural mountain and the first time we come here had gone there, so no one know knew the way how to climb the mountain. Finally, we find found the cryptogram. It takes took two hours to go up and go down the mountain. Everybody was very tired after climbing the mountain. And finally, the last place we find found in the cryptogram is was a beach. Then we get got into the car and go ahead headed towards the beach. Everybody feel felt happy when we got to the beach. We really have had a great time duing the weekend.
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My Weekend

Well, I spent a great time with my friends camping at the weekend. On Saturday, I got up very early in 5:00 AM. I brushed my teeth very quickly. Because I am car sick I had to cook something to eat and drink and take my medicine. After finishing all of that, I motorbiked to the rendezvous. When I came, everybody was talking together. The leader decided to divide 12 people into 3 groups; one group per car. We played a game called "cryptogram". We had to find the cryptogram to know the place where we will go. The first cryptogram we found was the first rest stop to take breakfast. After eating breakfast we found the second cryptogram which was a mountain. Well, when we got there we had to find the third cryptogram to know who will guide us to climb the mountain. Actually, this was a natural mountain and the first time we came there. So no one knew the way to climb the mountain. Finally, we found the cryptogram. It took two hours to go up and go down the mountain. Everybody was very tired afterwards. Finally, the last place we found in the cryptogram was a beach. We drove to the beach. Everybody felt happy at the beach. We really had a great time that weekend.
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not bad, this is a good one.
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its good for you just preper you'r self for the next one

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