A little cat Once upon a time, there was a little cat, the cat was yellow and very small. Her name was Kitty. I was little too in that time and I always played with Kitty. We was best friends and we s

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A little cat Once upon a time, there was a little cat, the cat was yellow and very small. Her name was Kitty. I was little too in that time and I always played with Kitty. We was best friends and we shared everytings with each other. When I became older, I went to another city and I never saw her. Where is little Kitty? Dear please don't forget me.

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A little cat

Once upon a time, there was a little cat, the cat was yellow and very small.
Her name was Kitty. I was little too in that time and I always played with Kitty. We were best friends and we shared everyting with each other. When I became older, I went to another city and I never saw her. Where is little Kitty? Dear please don't forget me.

First of all, sorry for rewrite your story. Your story was good but I just make it more informal style. Here comes my version of your lovely story. Once upon a time, there was a kitten which was yellow and very small. Her name was Kitty. I was little at that time as well and I always played with her. We were best friends and we shared everything with each other. When I grew older, I moved to another city and I never met her again. Where is my little Kitty? Dear, please do not forget me. Hope you don't mind I changed some parts of your story. If you feel somewhere is not correct or not related to your original story, Please correct my mistakes as well. Thank you.

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