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WORKING ABROAD
It's a fact thar in the last years in Spain, not only young peaple also peaple etweenn forty and fifty can't find a decent job.
Our politicians didn't mind at all, maybe they have "another own problems " to attend. If instead having stealed million and million of euros, the should have been working in creating employment opportunities, so that these young peaple shouldn´t go abroad to find a decent and proper employment.
What most peaple seen to forget is that in other countries of Europe either things are better. Above all to young s without cualifications nor studies. Those youngs will be exploted or they will find low-paying jobs as a waiter for example.
Other case are youngs whose have studies, with one or two degrees and speaking languages. They are our generation more preparated. Most of them are engineiers, doctors, investigators what mean that own more brilliant brains go abroad and maybe we will lost them forever. Since they will be good paid and the will have recognition; over there, fact that here in Spain would be imposible!
The effects of this lost, we will suffer in a few years when Spain becomes a countrie of old peaple and no qualified youngs, if new politicians don't start to change the actual situation.
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One more Exam Writing.
WORKING ABROADIt's a fact that in the last years in Spain, not only young peaple also people between forty and fifty can't find a decent job.
Our politicians don't mind at all, maybe they have "another own problem " to attend. If instead having stealed million and million of euros, they should have been working in creating employment opportunities, so that these young people shouldn´t go abroad to find a decent and proper employment.
What most people seem to forget is that in other countries of Europe either things are better. Above all to young, without cualifications nor studies. Those youngs will be exploted or they will find low-paying jobs as a waiter for example.
Other cases are youngs which studies, with one or two degrees and speaking languages. They are our generation, which is more prepared. Most of them are engineiers, doctors, investigators, what I mean is that more brilliant brains go abroad and maybe we will loose them forever. Since they will be good paid and the will have recognition; over there, fact is that here in Spain it would be imposible!
The effects of this lost, we will suffer in a few years when Spain becomes a countrie of old peaple and no qualified youngs, if the new politicians don't start to change the actual situation.
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One more Writing Exam.
WORKING ABROAD
It's a fact that in the last few years in Spain, not only young people but also people betweenn forty and fifty can't find a decent job.
Our politicians don't mind care at all, maybe they have "another their own problems " to attend to. If Instead having stolen million and million of Euros, the should have been working to create employment opportunities, so that these young people wouldn't need to go abroad to find a decent and proper employment.
What most people seem to forget is that in other European countries of Europe either things are better. After all, to be young is to be without qualifications nor studies education. These young people will be are exploited or they will find accept low-paying jobs as a like waiting tables, for example.
Other case On the other hand, there are youngs people whose have studies education, with one or two degrees and who can speaking foreign languages. They are our generation(??) more preparated. Most of them are engineiers, doctors, investigators and researchers, which means that own more brilliant the people with brains go abroad and maybe we may lose them forever. Since they will be good well-paid and they will have recognition; success over there, fact that here in Spain which would be impossible here in Spain!
The effects of this loss, We will suffer the effects of this loss in a few years when Spain becomes a country of old people and no qualified young people, if new politicians don't start to change the actual situation.
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if you can, please use auto correct, there are too many mistakes for me to correct this entry.
kind regards raph
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