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Essay about global obesity Currently, obesity is very present in our society. People is suffering this ill from earlier ages and so people should analyse their causes and find out solutions. On the one hand, obesity is not only produced by what we eating, but also by we drinking. For example, nowadays people when are thirsty, prefer having soft drinks rather than water without thinking about how hurtful it is for their health. In this aspect, parents should told their children since they are younger, the importande of not changing water by other type of drinks. On the other hand, the food which is consumed by people in the current society is extremely damaging. An example is fast food, because nowadays most people prefer this type of food as it cheaper, faster to cook... Therefore, people must be aware of the damage which we are doing ourselves and starting to eat healthier food. To sum up, obesity is a problem very common in our society, so this reason it is very important that since we are kids, we know the consecuences of having a bad diety.

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Essay about global obesity

Currently, obesity is very present (better: common, or prevalent) in our society. People are suffering from this illness at an early age,and so people we should analyse their causes and look for solutions.

On the one hand, obesity is not only produced by what we eating, but also by what we drinking. For example, nowadays when people are thirsty, they prefer having soft drinks rather than water without thinking about how harmful it is for their health. In this respect, parents should tell their children since they are younger, the importance of not substituting water with other types of drinks.

On the other hand, the food which is consumed by people in the current society today is extremely damaging harmful. An (better: one) example is fast food, because nowadays most people prefer this type of food as it cheaper and faster to cook... Therefore, people must be aware of the damage which they are doing to themselves and starting to eat healthier food.

To sum up, obesity is a very common problem in our society, so for this reason it is very important that since from the time we are kids, we know the consequences of having a bad diety.

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