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Cover letter These are randoms sentences from my cover letter, could you please tell me if they're correct / make sense ? Thanks ! "Following your job offer for an internship, I would like to send you my application. I have included my resume along with this letter. " "This internship would be the perfect way to integrate myself into your airline." " Having always loved customer relationships, this kind of contact is what makes my work rewarding. Working as a Passenger Service Agent resembles everything that I love: a varied and international clientele, use of foreign languages, working in a group, responsibility for passengers and colleagues, versatility, and a constant need to adapt." "Air France is more than a simple airline; it is a symbol of France, and of what France offers best. Being able to represent the company and France in such a renowned airport would be an immense honor, as I am well aware of the importance represented." "Open, versatile, organized, and able to easily adapt, I am convinced that I have all the qualities necessary to work in the Passenger Service Agent become a Passenger Service Agent."

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Cover letter

These are randoms sentences from my cover letter, could you please tell me if they're correct / make sense ? Thanks !

"Following your job offer for an internship, I would like to send you my application. I have included my resumé along with this letter. "
"This internship would be the perfect way to integrate myself into your airline."*
" Having always loved customer-relations, this kind of contact is what makes my work rewarding. Working as a Passenger Service Agent represents everything that I love: a varied and international clientele, use of foreign languages, working in a group, responsibility for passengers and colleagues, versatility and the constant need to adapt."
"Air France is more than a simple airline; it is a symbol of France and of what France offers best. Being able to represent the company and France in such a renowned airport would be an immense honor, as I am well aware of the importance represented."
"Open, versatile, organized, and able to adapt easily, I am convinced that I have all the qualities necessary to work in the Passenger Service Agency and to become a Passenger Service Agent."

*This is perfectly good English but sounds very amusing. Is that what you wanted?

Very well written! You're hired! (not fired).

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Sorry, made a mistake at the last sentence. I meant "Open, versatile, organized, and able to easily adapt, I am convinced that I have all the qualities necessary to work as a Passenger Service Agent".

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