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Hi italki community ! Could somebody give me a hand correct this. There was a man that always had a dream about travelling around the world but his nine-to five job kept him busy. He liked his demanding job but also he wanted to know new cultures, meet some people and get involved in other places. He had found out from his friends, colleagues, and his relatives that travelling was a good way to do this , but sometimes he had not courage to do it maybe because he think a lot about what others may think about their decisions. After several months he realised that working for others it would not be his whole dream. During his vacations he decided to quit his job but not because he did not found interesting. So he took his cell phone and told his manager about his decision, after a while his boss found it fascinating and recommended him a lot of places and gave certain advice to do whatever makes him happy and feel confident.

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Hi italki community ! Could somebody give me a hand correct this.

There was a man that had always had a dream about travelling around the world  but his nine-to five job kept him busy. He liked his demanding job but also he wanted to get to know new cultures, meet some people and get involved in other places. He had found out (or, had heard) from his friends, colleagues, and his relatives that travelling was a good way to do this , sometimes he had not had the courage to do it maybe because he thought think a lot about what others may think about his their decisions. After several months he realized that working for others it would not be his whole dream. During his vacations he decided to quit his job but not because he did not find it found interesting. So he took his cell phone and told his manager about his decision, after a while his boss found it fascinating and recommended him a lot of places and gave him the certain advice to do whatever makes him happy and feel confident.

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