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TRANSLATION. TEXT 6 DAY 08/04/2016 The mayor of São Paulo, Fernando Haddad, said this friday (8) that the app of transportation Uber must be allowed, but with restrictions. It's impossible to allowed without rules, that would be wrong and that it's impossible to forbid, because São Paulo needs the inovation that tecnology to be a better city. The right way is the regulamentation, with criterion, fiscalization and without overwhelming competition. The aldermans said that this is a new chapter of the soap opera of the legalization of private transportation service, that today works witouth any regulamentation inthe city. Last year, in pression of the taxis, the government approved a project that vetoed Uber in São Paulo. But, three months later, Hadded approved the app using one decree, so, without the necessity of a votation of aldermans

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TRANSLATION. TEXT 6 DAY 08/04/2016

The mayor of São Paulo, Fernando Haddad, said this friday (8) that the transportation app Uber must be allowed, but with restrictions.
It's impossible to allow it without rules, that would be wrong and that it's impossible to forbid it, because São Paulo needs the inovation that tecnology brings (you forgot a word there) to be a better city. The right way to do it is with regulation, with criteria (not sure if that's what you meant), surveilance/supervision and with no overwhelming competition.
The aldermen said that this is a new chapter of the private transportation service legalization soap opera, that today runs with no regulation in the city.
Last year, under pressure of the taxi drivers, the government approved a bill that vetoed Uber in São Paulo. But, three months later, Haddad approved the app with a decree, thus without the need for  aldermen approval.

The plural of Man is Men. So, the plural of Alderman is Aldermen. Just like the plural of Woman is Women

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