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Could someone correct my text please? Dear Sir, I read your last article about graffiti artists. I'd like to share my point of view about it with other readers. To my mind, graffiti art is a good thing, usually they are colourful and amazing drawings, in my opinion they deserve more respect. Firstly, our city has a lot of buildings, a lot of things that transform the city in a cold city, we have a lot of visual pollution and something like graffiti art might transform the city in a happier city. Secondly, that artists need an appropriate places to expose their arts, they can't do it anywhere, they need some support from the government to produce it. If they have some permission to use a wall in a specific place everything will be better. Lastly, graffiti is art, all kind of art need support, art is good for our culture. All in all, I feel very strongly that graffiti artists deserve all kind of support, art galleries also might be a good place to the artists expose their arts, but the artists can't do this alone, they need some help, mainly from the government.

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Could someone correct my text please?

Dear Sir,

I read your last article about graffiti artists. I'd like to share my point of view about it with other readers.

To my mind, graffiti art is a good thing. Usually they are colourful and amazing drawings and in my opinion they deserve more respect.

Firstly, our city has a lot of buildings and a lot of things that transform it to a dismal place. We have a lot of visual pollution and something like graffiti art might transform the city to a happier one.

Secondly, artists need an appropriate place to show their art but they can't do it anywhere so they need some support from the government to do it. If they have permission to use a wall in a specific place everything will be better.

Lastly, graffiti is art and all kinds of art need support. Art is good for our culture.

All in all, I feel very strongly that graffiti artists deserve every kind of support. Art galleries also might be a good place to the artists to show their work, but the artists can't do this alone and need some help, mainly from the government.

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