A littele bit about me
Hi there! My name is Claudia, I'm 22 and I'm leaving in Romania. I'm also half Turkish. I was born in Romania in a small town close to Bucharest. My first part of my childhood I grow up in Istanbul, where I started study elementary school.After that I Move up in Romania with whole family.Mind you I grew up in multicultural family I chose to study foreign languages at college. I think easiest way to learn a new language is talking all the time that language. If you don't practice to talk in that language you never become a fluent speaker. So that is why I'm here. I wanna become a fluent and more confident with my knowledge in the matter of foreign languages.
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A littele little bit about me
Hi there! My name is Claudia, and I'm 22. and I'm leaving in Romania. I'm also half Turkish. I was born in Romania in a small town close to Bucharest. ***My first part of my childhood I grow grew up in Istanbul, where I started study elementary school.After that I Move moved up in Romania with whole family.Mind you, I grew up in a multicultural family. I chose to study foreign languages at college. I think the easiest way to learn a new language is talking all the time that language speaking that language all the time. If you don't practice to talk in speaking that language you will never become a fluent speaker. So that is why I'm here. I wanna want to become a fluent and more confident with my knowledge in the matter of foreign languages.1. Correct spelling is "little"
2. This sentence is a run-on. It can be corrected several ways.I chose to delete the coma and combine those two phrases using "and" . I then place a period after "I'm 22.
3. Leaving should be spelled "living. You can say "I'm living in Romania" or "I live in Romania"
4. The beginning isn't necessarily wrong but it isn't how a native speaker would say it. You would say "During the first part of my childhood, I grew up.....
5. grew is the past tense of grow . You don't need a coma after Istanbul in that sentence
6. moved is that past tense of move. I'm not sure what you meant by "moved up in Romania" -
7. You can put a coma after "mind you" - since it is more of a filler and the rest of the sentence can stand alone. The phrase "mind you" is used more in casual conversation, but rarely in writing description.
8. I also corrected the phrasing of the last few sentences.
9. wanna is slang - used in casual speaking - but is not grammatically correct for writing.
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A littele bit about me
Hi there! My name is Claudia, I'm 22 and I'm leaving living in Romania. I'm also half Turkish. I was born in Romania in a small town close to Bucharest. For the My first part of my childhood, I grew up in Istanbul, where I attended (started studying at) elementary school.After that I moved to up in Romania with my/the whole family.Mind you, I grew up in a multicultural family so I chose to study foreign languages at university. I think the easiest way to learn a new language is speaking it talking all the time that language. If you don't practice speaking to talk in that/the language you never become a fluent speaker. So that is why I'm here. I want to become a fluent and more confident with my /regarding my knowledge in the matter of foreign languages.Want to progress faster?
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