Hobbies Hello everyone, I going to tell you about my rutines. I play soccer in my free days. But I am not member of the some team. In the high school (almost 8 years ago) I was in a team of the town,

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Hobbies Hello everyone, I going to tell you about my rutines. I play soccer in my free days. But I am not member of the some team. In the high school (almost 8 years ago) I was in a team of the town, I was member for one a half or two years. And two years ago I was member of the university team for one season, approximately by four or five months. I think that I am a good player but I do not take it seriously so other person replace me soon. Always I have played of defense, In back of the square. I can do almost everything that the position needs but always I fall because I am slim and when the people hits with me I can’t keep stand jajaja. Also I watch tv every day, series like Mozart in the jungle, chasing life, superstore, the big bang theory, two and a half man. Programs of comedy and drama mainly. I watch anime, many kinds of anime, I used to watch three or four chapters by day but lately I only watch one or two chapters by week. I sail in internet a lot of time, visit twitter, facebook and others pages with news. Sometimes a play playstation in my house but it is not mine, only when my friend Walter lend it to me. Ok, they are my hobbies, TV, Soccer, PC and Play. I hope a new hobbie will be speak in English with new friends, see you soon. Bye.

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Hobbies

Hello everyone, I going to tell you about my routines.
I play soccer in on my free days. But I am not member of a the some team.
In the high school (almost 8 years ago) I was in a team of the town, of which I was member for one a half or two years.
And two years ago I was member of the university team for one season, for approximately by four or five months.
I think that I am a good player but I do not take it seriously so another person will replace me soon.
Always I have always played of in defense, In back of the square.
I can do almost everything that the position needs requires but always I fall because I am slim and when the people hits with me I can’t keep stand jajaja.

Also I watch tv every day, series like Mozart in the jJungle, cChasing Life, Superstore, The bBig Bang tTheory, two and a half man. Programs of comedy and drama mainly.
I watch anime animations, many kinds of anime. I used to watch three or four chapters by each day but lately I only watch one or two chapters by per week.
I sail in surf the internet a lot of time, visit twitter, facebook and others pages with news.
Sometimes a play playstation in my house but it is not mine, only when my friend Walter lend it to me.

Ok, they are my hobbies, TV, Soccer, PC and Play.
I hope a new hobbie will be speak in English with new friends, see you soon. Bye.

Sorry, had to break the correction up in two parts. Italki was complaining about too many characters. Here is the rest:

I watch anime, many kinds of anime. I used to watch three or four chapters by every day but lately I only watch one or two chapters by a week.
I sail in surf the internet a lot of time (better: I surf the internet a lot, or: I often surf the internet), visit twitter, facebook and others pages with news.
Sometimes a I play playstation in my house (better: I sometimes play playstation...) but it is not mine, only when my friend Walter lends it to me. (better: it is not mine. I can only play when my friend Walter lends me his one.)

Ok, they these are my hobbies: TV, Soccer, PC and Play. (these don't need to be capitalized: tv, soccer, pc and play/gaming)
I hope a new hobbie hobby will be speak in speaking English with new friends, see you soon. Bye.

Hobbies

Hello everyone, I am going to tell you about my routines.
I play soccer in my free days on my days off, but But I am not a member of the some a team (better: but don't belong to a team).
In the high school (almost 8 years ago) I was in a team of the town, I was member for one a half or two years.
While in high school (almost 8 years ago), I was a member of my town's team for one and a half to two years.

And two years ago I was a member of the university team for one season, for approximately by four or five months.
I think that I am a good player but I do not take it seriously so another person will soon replace me soon.
Always I have always played of defense, In the back of the square.
I can do almost everything that the position needs is required for this position but always I fall because I am slim and when the people hits with me I can’t keep stand remain standing/upright jajaja.

Also I I also watch tv every day, series like Mozart in the jJungle, cChasing lLife, sSuperstore, the bBig bBang tTheory, tTwo and a hHalf mMan (titles of books, movies, tv series need to be capatalized). Programs of comedy and drama mainly (better: Mainly comedy and drama series .)

Thanks Wanda for your time.

Didn't see there was a correction already, but you can use mine as a "second opinion". Really well done by the way! Keep it up!

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