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Please correct my first writing task The charts show that the ratio of the way, taking care of peril waste products in three countries; Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom with respect to five different methods. All the country deal with the Underground, with 22%, 55% and 82% in Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom respectively. As it shows, more than 80% of products were put into underground in United Kingdom, whereas, almost 70% of wastes were recycled in Republic of Korea. Besides, the only country which does not use recycling is United Kingdom, but in Sweden, a quarter percent of it is recycled, likewise Republic of Korea.. Plus, there is a common point in Republic of Korea and Sweden that even though the each ratio is scattered, the three ways to deal with only are precisely the same; Underground, Incineration and Recycling. In European countries such as Sweden and United Kingdom tend to deal with Underground though, the only country that the method of recycling occupies most part is Republic of Korea. ________________________________ I am very pleasured, if you give me your hands. Thank you so much!!

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Please correct my first writing task

The charts show the ratio of peril waste products in three countries; the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom with respect to five different methods.

All the countries deal with the Underground, with 22%, 55% and 82% in the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom, respectively. As it shows, more than 80% of products were put into underground in United Kingdom, whereas, almost 70% of wastes were recycled in Republic of Korea. Besides, the only country which does not use recycling is the United Kingdom, but in Sweden, a quarter percent of it is recycled, likewise in the Republic of Korea.. Plus, there is a common point in both the  Republic of Korea and Sweden and even though each ratio is scattered, the three ways they deal with waste deal are precisely the same; Underground, Incineration and Recycling.

European countries such as Sweden and the United Kingdom tend to deal with Underground though. The only country that the method of recycling occupies the most part is the Republic of Korea.

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I am very pleasured, if you give me your hands.
Thank you so much!!

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