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尊重的中国朋友们,请帮我查看我笔译的引文。谢谢! 引文: 唯一不再回来的是年轻和旅游机会。Maurice Samuel Roger Charles Druon 旅行是最好的医生之一。Pierre-Alexis Ponson du Terrail 旅游之后每个人都改变。谚语 世界是一本书, 不旅行的人只看到其中的一页 Cecelia Ahern 不一定活着,但是一定要旅游。 William Seward Burroughs. 只有两件事我们会后悔在临终-太少爱,太少旅游。 Mark Twen 好人喝好啤酒 。 Hunter Stockton Thompson 葡萄酒使人成为善良一点,使昏德和解。 Anton Chehov 人去钓鱼不是为了打鱼,为了心逸。Neil Gaiman

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First of all, I don't understand Russian, hahha, hope you won't be mad when you see my correction in English. 

尊重的中国朋友们,请帮我查看我笔译的引文。谢谢!

引文:
唯一不再回来的是年轻和旅游机会。Maurice Samuel Roger Charles Druon  年轻 is an adj., in this case, you might need a noun to describe the youth, so it will be 青春. I remember that there is a song when I learnt it at my primary school called 青春舞曲, it's esay to understand and you can find it at google. 


旅行是最好的医生之一。Pierre-Alexis Ponson du Terrail


旅游之后每个人都改变。

谚语
世界是一本书, 不旅行的人只看到其中的一页 Cecelia Ahern
不一定活着,但是一定要旅游。 William Seward Burroughs. I would say 人可以不活着 to express a sentence like " you can be dead, but you have to travel". Actually I tried to find this sentence but I failed, if what I understand is right, would you mind telling me the original quote of this writer? I'm agreed with him. 


只有两件事我们会后悔在临终(在临终时后悔)-太少爱,太少旅游。(爱得太少,旅游得太少) Mark Twen We put the phrases to describe the time, places, characters, etc. before the verb. Also, for the part to describe an action, we put it after the verb, like 爱得太迟, which means too late to love. 


好人喝好啤酒 。 Hunter Stockton Thompson


葡萄酒使人成为(变得)善良一点,使昏德(I don't understand this word.)和解。 Anton Chehov  "Become" in this case we translate it into Chinese, we usually use 变得 to highlight the changes. 

人去钓鱼不是为了打鱼,为了心逸。Neil Gaiman

Hope that it will be a little bit helpful. (:

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