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Vietnam is a small country but I, like many others, am proud of it. I grew up in peace, with a caring and protective of family, a good school and a nice society. Men and women are equal here. Vietnamese people are very friendly. If you come here and find that you don't know the way, you just need to stop at a roadside restaurant or a store to ask. There will be enthusiastic people to show you. You can get help from them whenever you need. In Vietnam there are 3 major cities: Ho Chi Minh city (also known as Saigon), Hanoi city and Da Nang city. Hanoi is located in North-capital of my country. It's a very quiet town with a cold climate. Ho Chi Minh is a city located in the south. Unlike Hanoi it has a summer climate and is an extremely busy place. Also located in the centre is Da Nang. This city has 2 distinct seasons, the hot season and the cold season. In the central region of Vietnam there is a city known as the 'city worth living in' and it is a coastal city. It's not too crowded and is very beautiful especially at night. At night there is a bridge which sparkles with colourful lights. Luckily for me I was born in this city. I hope that at some point you can come here and I will be your guide. We can go to see the beautiful scenery and ancient temples. Not only that, I will show you the great food we have here. It's very interesting. In the city where I live there are a lot of people from all over the world that come here for business and leisure.This was really good. Most of what I changed was just to make it sound more natural in English but what you wrote was great!
Dear
I am Mr. Amir Khalid.; I work with a reputable financial institution in Togo as an Account Officer in the Treasury/Credit Control Unit. I was mandated to look for a Customer who died some years back in Westgate shopping mall attack by Al-Shabaab terror attack, on 23rd September 2013 to enable his family claim his inheritance funds.
After these several unsuccessful attempts, I decided to track his last name over the Internet, to locate any member of his family hence I contacted you, I have contacted you to assist in repatriating the assets and Capital valued at £12,540,000.00 Million pounds (Twelve Million, Five Hundred and Forty Thousand Pounds Only) left behind by my client before they get confiscated or declared unserviceable by the share holders of this Financial Institution, so that they can share his funds as dividends among themselves. For more information do reply at ([email protected])
I am waiting to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Mr. Amir Khalid.
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