The final stage of my master's thesis
It is a delightful day today, because my mentor reviewed my draft thesis and approved my research methods and final results. Although he did not compliment my work, I think no criticism is the big praise! haha! He is an extremely strict, stubborn person and hardly praise us even when we do something good. What he normally say is "Well, make an effort to do it better". As a result, all the other fellow students of mine have been scolded seriously because their work was not catering for his requirements.
Actually I felt a bit nervious when I sent the thesis to him, getting criticism is not comfortble after all. So everhting is going to be much easier and I just need to add some detailed information to my thesis, which can make it more reasonable!
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The final stage of my master's thesis
It is a delightful (this is fine, but it isn't very commonly used) day today, because my mentor/supervisor reviewed my draft thesis/thesis draft/the draft of my thesis and approved my research methods and final results. Although he did not compliment my work, I think no criticism is the big praise/no criticism is praise enough! Haha! He is an extremely strict, stubborn person and hardly ever/seldom/rarely praises us even when we do something good. What he normally says is "Well, make an effort to do it better". As a result, all the other fellow students of mine/all my classmates/coursemates have been scolded seriously because their work was not catering did not cater for his requirements/has not met his standards.Actually I felt a bit nervious when I sent the thesis to him, since, after all, getting/receiving criticism is not comfortable/makes me feel uncomfortable/nobody likes to hear criticism/be criticised after all. So everything is going to be much easier and I just need to add some detailed information to my thesis, which can make it more reasonable (not sure what you mean here)/which will make it better/which will improve it!
Great job! I know I've written a lot comments but they're just suggestion to make it sound more native and natural. You write very well!
Congratulations on your thesis draft meeting your supervisor's standards and good luck!
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The final stage of my master's thesis
It is a delightful day today, because my mentor reviewed my draft thesis and approved my research methods and final results. Although he did not compliment my work, I think no criticism is the big praise! haha! He is an extremely strict, stubborn person and hardly praises us even when we do something good. What he normally says is "Well, make an effort to do it better". As a result, all the other fellow students of mine have been scolded seriously because their work did not catering to his requirements.Actually I felt a bit nervious when I sent the thesis to him, getting criticism is not comfortable after all. So everything is going to be much easier and I just need to add some detailed information to my thesis, which can make it more reasonable!
Good Job Fei Wang, and Congratulations!
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