Search from various English teachers...
China flagOlivia
Site and Motion 1. The wooden wall was in the shadow of the sun at the time I took the photograph. But because the particles of the light are out of the sun, we can still see the shadow part. At the edge of the building, the particles from sunlight and the eaves are mixed, which make the edges look blurry. 2.Particles as the most basic elements, they can be regarded as the same in the macroscopic aspect. While the different number of particles constitute different kinds of object. Glass is transparent and reflective but fragile, and the stone is strong but opaque. 3.All of the object is not an eternal existence, because particles are constantly absorb and release. When the sun shines directly into the glass, the particles of light are reflected, making the glass into a state of disappearing. The surface of the actual object covered by the virtual cloud which is constituted by particles. These particles run from one object’s track to another object’s. So when we take photos from the building, the particles of the pinhole camera, or the film or ourselves, may participate in the composition of the building’s virtual cloud. Photography object must be a genuine thing, painting can be fabricated, something that did not appear on the front can be drawn. This kind of thing would be positioned in the camera but photography. Refer is the fundamental of photography. We often say that the invention of photography is a painter, but photography was invented by a chemist, photography is the essence of the existed.

Corrections · 2

0

Site and Motion

1. The wooden wall was in shadow when I took the photograph. But because of the sunlight we can still see the shadow part. At the edge of the building, the particles from sunlight* and the eaves are mixed, which make the edges look blurry.

2.Particles are the most basic elements and can be regarded as the same in their macroscopic aspect. Whereas the different number of particles constitute different kinds of object. Glass is transparent and reflective but fragile, and the stone is strong but opaque.

3.An object in its entirety does not endure, because its particles are constantly being absorbed and released. When the sun shines directly into the glass, the particles of light are refracted, making the glass disappear from view.

The surface of an actual object is covered by the virtual cloud which is constituted of particles. These particles run from one object’s track to another's. So when we take photos of the building, the particles of the pinhole camera, or film ourselves, we may participate in the composition of the building’s virtual cloud. A photographic object must be real; the intersection of light rays which can be caught on a film. Painting can be fabricated, something that did not appear on the canvas can be drawn. This kind of thing would be positioned in the camera by photography. (Refer?) is the fundamental of photography. We often say that the invention of photography was painting, but photography was invented by a chemist and photography is the essence of the object.

*particles from the sunlight = photons.

Well written. I'm not sure if I understood some of it, though. Is the essay a scientific or an artistic one? I have treated it as a little of both.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today