Television discourage young people taking part in sports themselves
Please correct the following writing in terms of grammar and choice of words. If I write this as report to hand my university class, is it a correct sentence? (Do not estimate how good my idea is, only how good my English is)
Nowadays it is seen that children are not apt to participate in sports. Not little people claims that it is blame to televisions which broadcast various sports games all the day. I consider the responsibility of televisions which have significant effect to children.
First, the reason why some people think televisions harmful about this problem might be that children are satisfied with sports which are broadcasted on televisions. They are able to watch sports games even in their own houses. It is more dangerous and tired to play sports themselves than watch sports on televisions.
On the other hand, it is said that all responsibility for discouraging children participating in sports is not for televisions too. Televisions are opportunities for children to start sports rather than let them in their houses.
Through sports which children watch on television, they learn sports they have never know.
For example about me, I am not interested in sports relatively. I hardly watched sports on televisions When I was child. It is because my parents were not interested in sports and did not watch them on televisions. This case says that televisions give chance to touch sports. They increase possibility for children to play sports.
In summary, it is necessary for children to contact with sports and the easiest way to do it is watching sports broadcasting on televisions. Even if it rather decreases possibility to play sports that children watch television all the day, they should know what sports is through televisions.
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