My weekend
Last weekend was very relaxing. It begun on Friday after work, when I got home and decided to see one more episode of "Dexter" on Netflix. Of course I ended up watching nine of them and it took almost the entire time I had left on that day. But I made popcorn, so the time spent on my sofa was definitely worth it.
Saturday started with my college class that was supposed to last four hours but was already over two hours after it begun, and with a presentation I had to do where everything went well despite I being nervous. That gave me enough time to go home and watch another episode of Dexter (I believe I may be getting addicted, but who isn't addicted to a series after them invented Netflix?). After it finished I went on to have lunch and then to get ready to visit my friend. She had just moved and invited me and some common friends to get to know her new apartment.
It was a pretty apartment. Wasn't big, but was big enough for two young adults to start a new life together. I kind of envied them and wished I had my own place, but then I thought about cleaning it and I realized that perhaps I'm too lazy for doing that, at least so far.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 4
0
My weekend
Last weekend was very relaxing. It began on Friday after work, when I got home and decided to watch one more episode of Dexter on Netflix. Of course I ended up watching nine of them and it took up almost the entire time I had left on that day. But I made popcorn, so the time spent on my sofa was definitely worth it.Saturday started with my college class that was supposed to last four hours but ended only two hours after it began I had to do a presentation, and despite being nervous, everything went well. That gave me enough time to go home and watch another episode of Dexter (I believe I may be getting addicted, but who isn't addicted to some TV series after they invented Netflix?) After it finished I went on to have lunch and then to get ready to visit my friend. She had just moved and invited me and some of our friends to see her new apartment.
It was a pretty apartment. It wasn't big, but it was big enough for two young adults to start a new life together. I kind of envied them and wished I had my own place, but then I thought about cleaning it and I realized that perhaps I'm too lazy for doing that, at least for now.
(Instead of "some of our friends," you could also say "some friends in common," but "our friends" flows better.)
0
Hello Italkian friend
My weekend
My college class started on Saturday which was supposed to last four hours but it was already over two hours after it began. Despite being nervous, I did a great job with a presentation I was supposed to make. That gave me enough time to go home and watch another episode of Dexter (I believe I may be getting addicted to it, but who isn't addicted to a series after the creation of Netflix?). After it finished I went on to have lunch and then to get ready to visit my friend. She had just moved and invited me and some common friends to get to know her new apartment.
It was a pretty apartment. It wasn't big, although it was big enough for two young adults to start a new life together. I kind of envied them and wished I had my own place, but then I thought about cleaning it and I realized that perhaps I'm too lazy for doing that, at least so far.
Congrats! You have done a great job. Of course that you might disagree with me but I tried to help you iron out some unnecessary phrase constructions which were a little bit similar to the way we build sentences in Portuguese.
Cheers!
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
