Self introduction
hi Everyone
My name is 林冠宏，english name is Jim Lin,and I come form taiwan taipei.
I would like to learn english and japanese because the two language are important in taiwan.
I hope my english and japanese become powerful in this website.
Thank you for your reading.
(if you can,please help to revision,thank you.)
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Self introduction
hi Everyone
My name is 林冠宏，english name is Jim Lin,and I come form from taiwan taipei.
I would like to learn english and japanese because the these two language are important in taiwan.
I hope my english and japanese become powerful in this website.
Thank you for your reading.
(if you can,please help to revision revise,thank you.)
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Introducing myself
Hi everyone.My name is 林冠宏, my English name is Jim Lin and I come from Taiwan Taipei.
I would like to learn English and Japanese because these two languages are important in Taiwan.
I hope my English and Japanese improve because of this website.
Thank you for your reading.
(If you can, please help to correct this. Thank you.)
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hi Margaret,thank you for your comment.
Ok,I remembered to Countries should have upper case letters at the beginning.
So,"Powerful" is not using here.
However,Is the correct "I hope my english and japanese capability become proficient on this website."?
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"Powerful" is incorrect here. You might mean "proficient. "
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If you do not understand I will correct it again. Countries should have upper case letters at the beginning.
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