Motivation factors Today's assignment was to write to a new employee about my organization, talking about the motivation factors applied in our company. =) April 06, 2016 Dear Mr. Smith, I am addre

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Motivation factors Today's assignment was to write to a new employee about my organization, talking about the motivation factors applied in our company. =) April 06, 2016 Dear Mr. Smith, I am addressing you in order to tell you a little bit more about our team, since you are about to join us. I must begin by saying that at SoftCon Inc. you will be given opportunities to develop a career. We believe is important for the employees to see how far they get. And the answer to this question is "As far as you want to". In addiction to that, since you made into the team, we already know you are totally capable of making important decisions, and you will have the liberty to make them. After you go through the adjusting period, you will realize the work itself is not as hard as it seems. We celebrate the goals we achieve, since we recognize the amount of effort put into it. Actually, we even have monthly reunions where the Head of IT Solutions points out the great things we accomplished. And probably the most important thing we care about is helping you to learn things you will you use in your life. Your personal growth is as important to us as the tasks you go through on daily bases. So, welcome to SoftCon Inc. and get ready, because your new life is about to start. Best regards. Plínio Almeida Lead Software Engineer

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Plinio, most of this is correct and well written - I wish that I could write Italian as well as you are writing English. I have made a few small suggestions some of which you could regard as optional in colloquial English. By optional, I mean that it starts to become a reflection of a persons writing style. I have put a question mark after the changes that I would consider optional.

Motivation factors

Today's assignment was to write to a new employee about my organization, talking about the motivation factors applied in our company.
=)

April 06, 2016

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am addressing you in order to tell you a little bit more about our team, since you are about to join us.
I must begin by saying that at SoftCon Inc. you will be given opportunities to develop a career. We believe it is important for the employees to see how far can they get. And the answer to this question is "As far as you want to".
In addiction addition to that, since you made into the team, we already know that you are totally capable of making important decisions, and you will have the liberty to make them. After you go through the adjusting an adjustment period, you will realize the work itself is not as hard as it seems.
We celebrate the goals we achieve, since we recognize the amount of effort put into it. Actually, we even have monthly reunions where the Head of IT Solutions points out the great things we accomplished.
And probably the most important thing we care about is helping you to learn things you that will you use in your life. Your personal growth is as important to us as the tasks you go through on daily bases basis.
So, welcome to SoftCon Inc. and get ready, because your new life is about to start.

Best regards.

Plínio Almeida
Lead Software Engineer

Excellent use of English with very few little mistakes. Keep the good work! :)

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