Homeland
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land where my beloved
my birth place
where I see your face
my whole life's memories
despite the pain
with all the agony
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land where my beloved
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I will regret
through all my life
that day I left
your soil behind
a piece of hell what
I am examining
away your hills
and my peaceful town
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land where my beloved
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I spend my days
thinking of you
no one can fill
your place at all
my heart shakes
if I heard your name
my soul destroyed
with sorrow and blame
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land where my beloved
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Nothing but tears
bring the memories
of myself there
among the family
everything's lost
its real sense
only pain grows
more and more intense
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land where my beloved
*********************
Does he remember
my genuine love
or has he found
who gives more above
who loves him sincerely
and holds him dearly
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land where my beloved
*********************
** Ahmed Rafiq al-Mahdawi was a libyan poet. He was a genius poet who wrote lots of fascinating poems. The Italian occupiers were so upset with him because his poetry was a tool to call for freedom and dignity to his country. They excluded him, thus he immigrated to Turkey. When he was at his exile he wrote a very beautiful poem where he expressed his hard experience away his homeland.
I like this poem very very much. I tried to transform it to English. I didn't translate it literally. I picked the ideas and wrote them my way in English.
In these days where are living a major migrants crisis. Many migrants are going through tough times away their countries. Leaving the place where you lived and raised is always a hard decision to make. My heart goes out to them all.
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Homeland
I was A/THE fool when I decidedto leave the land OF my beloved
my birth place
where I see your face
my whole life's memories
despite the pain
with all the agony
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land OF my beloved (OR: TO LEAVE THE LAND WHERE MY BELOVED IS)
*********************
I will regret
throughOUT my life
thE day I left
your soil (SOUL?) behind
a piece of hell what
I am examining
away your hills
and my peaceful town
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land OF my beloved
*********************
I spend my days
thinking of you
no one can fill
your place at all
my heart shakes
if I hear your name
my soul destroyed
with sorrow and blame
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land OF my beloved
*********************
Nothing but tears
bring the memories
of myself BACK
among MY family
everything's lost
IN A real sense
only pain grows
more and more intense
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land OF my beloved
*********************
Does he remember
my genuine love
or has he found
who gives more above
who loves him sincerely
and holds him dearly
I was that fool when I decided
to leave the land OF my beloved
*********************
** Ahmed Rafiq al-Mahdawi was a Libyan poet. He was a genius poet who wrote lots of fascinating poems. The Italian occupiers were so upset with him because his poetry was a tool to call for freedom and dignity to his country. They excluded him, thus he immigrated to Turkey. When he was IN exile he wrote a very beautiful poem where he expressed his hard experience away his homeland.
I like this poem very very much. I tried to transform it INto English. I didn't translate it literally. I picked THROUGH the ideas and wrote them my way in English.
These days WE are living IN a major migrants' crisis. Many migrants are going through tough* (DIFFICULT) times away FROM their countries. Leaving the place where you lived and WERE raised is always a hard decision to make. My heart goes out to them all.
*Tough is a less formal word.
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It took quite long time to compose this ..:)
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Thank you.:)
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Nice words really it's describe a lot of us
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wow
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