With my sister
Today, I wake up at 8:30 pm, I took a shower and had breakfast I was willing to read a book but my sister wanted me to take her to Jamme-Elfnaa (A popular square in Marrakesh) to buy some gifts for her friend whom she is going to get married, so I took my book with me and we went there, while she doing the shopping and I was having a cup of coffee at a quite cafeteria with my book in the other hand...
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With my sister
Today I woke up at 8:30 am. I took a shower and had breakfast. I was willing wanted to read a book but my sister wanted me to take her to Jamme-Elfnaa (a popular square in Marrakesh) to buy some gifts for her friend whom she is going to get married. So I took my book with me and we went there. While she was doing the shopping, and I was having a cup of coffee in a quite quiet cafeteria, with my book in the other hand...It is better to use shorter sentences, makes it more readable.
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With my sister
Today, I woke up at 8:30 pm, I took a shower and had breakfast .I was willing to read a book but my sister wanted me to take her to Jamme-Elfnaa (A popular square in Marrakesh) to buy some gifts for her friend whom she is going to marry, so I took my book with me and we went there, while she doing the shopping I was having a cup of coffee at a quite cafeteria with my book in my hand...Want to progress faster?
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