In many countries, the proportion of elderly people is steadily increasing .[2011.10.8]
In many countries, the proportion of elderly people is steadily increasing .Dose this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
Recently a general trend is that the percentage of aging generation is increasingly growing. Though both challenges and chances exist under this circumstance, I firmly believe that it does have more positive effects on the society.
There is no denying that more elderly people will slow down the pace of social improvement. At the first place, the most significant part can be the labor shortage, due to that less people are at the working-age. As a consequence, young people are under heavy financial pressure to support the elderly people. In addition, people don’t have sufficient time to do more contribution to the society while they are busy making living.
Conversely, the beneficial aspect of the increase of elderly people should never be underestimated. The older, the more experienced, and the wise of elderly people play an extremely vital role in our lives. In that, if there are more elderly people ,it may make the whole society wiser. Besides, it will be more harmonious since elderly people, who are less impulsive, take up the most proportion of the population. What’s more, in the long run, the medical care and the public facilities can be promoted, by the consequence of the increasing needs of elderly people’s health care.
Overall, both sides, in general terms, have been carefully analyzed, more advantages, for my point of view, have been generated from this trend. Whereas there are still a lot things left to be done by governments to promote the society in the time of aging-generation.
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In many countries, the proportion of elderly people is steadily increasing .[2011.10.8]
In many countries, the proportion of elderly people is steadily increasing .Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?Recently a general trend is that the percentage of aging generation the elderly within the population is increasingly growing. Though both challenges and chances opportunities exist under this circumstance, I firmly believe that it does have more positive effects on the society.
There is no denying that more elderly people will slow down the pace of social improvement. At In the first place, the most significant part can be the labor shortage, due to the fact that less fewer people are at the working-age. As a consequence, young people are under heavy financial pressure to support the elderly people. In addition, people don’t have sufficient time to do more contribute to the society while they are busy making living.
Conversely, the beneficial aspect of the increase of elderly people should never be underestimated. The age older, the more experience, and the wisdom of elderly people play an extremely vital role in our lives. In fact that, if there are more elderly people ,it may make the whole society wiser. Besides, it will be more harmonious since elderly people, who are less impulsive, take up the most proportion of the population. What’s more, in the long run, the medical care and the public facilities can be improved promoted, because by the consequence of the increasing needs for elderly people’s health care.
Overall, both sides, in general terms, have been carefully analyzed, and more advantages, from my point of view, have been are generated from this trend. Whereas However, there are still a lot things left to be done by governments to improve promote the society in the time of aging-generations.
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