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大家好! 晚上好! 这个月我有我的生日。 (This month I have my birthday) 星期六我的生日。 (My birthday is on Saturday) 我不想礼物,因为礼物很贵。 (I don't want any presents, because presents are very expensive.) 我也不想多花。 (I also dont want lots of flowers) 但是我想多吃饭。 (But I want to eat a lot of food) 我想吃梨,西瓜,和苹果。 (I want to eat pears, watermelons, and apples.) 我不喜欢大晚会。 (I do not like big parties) 我不喜欢吃蛋糕因为我怕是胖。 (I do not like to eat cake because I am afraid of getting fat.) 我也觉得蛋糕很甜。 (I also think cake is taste very sweet.) 我的生日希望我旅行中国。 (My birthday wish is for me to travel to China)

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大家好! 晚上好!

这个月我有我的生日。 这个月我要过生日了,or  我的生日在这个月。(This month I have my birthday)
星期六是我的生日。 (My birthday is on Saturday)
我不想要礼物,因为礼物很贵。 (I don't want any presents, because presents are very expensive.)
我也不想要很多花。 (I also dont want lots of flowers)
但是我想多吃饭吃很多东西(or食物)。(But I want to eat a lot of food)
我想吃梨,西瓜,和苹果。 (I want to eat pears, watermelons, and apples.)
我不喜欢大晚会。 (I do not like big parties)
我不喜欢吃蛋糕因为我怕是变胖。 (I do not like to eat cake because I am afraid of getting fat.)
我也觉得蛋糕很甜。 (I also think cake is taste very sweet.)
我的生日希望愿望是我去中国旅行中国。 (My birthday wish is for me to travel to China)
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大家好! 晚上好!

这个月我有我的生日。 (我的生日在这个月)(This month I have my birthday)
星期六是我的生日。 (My birthday is on Saturday)
我不想要礼物,因为礼物很贵。 (I don't want any presents, because presents are very expensive.)
我也不想要很多花。 (I also dont want lots of flowers)
但是我想多吃东西。 (But I want to eat a lot of food)
我想吃梨,西瓜,和苹果。 (I want to eat pears, watermelons, and apples.)
我不喜欢大晚会。 (I do not like big parties)
我不喜欢吃蛋糕因为我怕会长胖。 (I do not like to eat cake because I am afraid of getting fat.)
我也觉得蛋糕很甜。 (I also think cake is taste very sweet.)
我的生日希望我旅行中国。(我的生日愿望是能去中国旅行)(My birthday wish is for me to travel to China)

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