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The thesis In my university, when the people are in the last grade they have to do an final thesis. If you not pass the thesis you can´t get the titration. In my case, I have to did my thesis about a period of History what I prefered because I studied History. I chose the spanish civil war and his relactionship with United State. It was soo interesting to research about this theme but also It very hard because I needed to ready many english documents. I dedicated 4 mouth to do my thesis. I delived in a correct term and they gave me a date who I´m going to do my exposition. I was very nervious but I could do very well and my thesis was valued with a 9,5/10. I´m soo proud of myselft because I think that my efforts was results.

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The thesis

In my university, when people are in the last grade they have to do a final thesis. If you do not pass the thesis you do not matriculate. In my case, I did my thesis about a period of history what I preferred because I studied History. I chose the Spanish civil war and his relationship with the United State. It was so interesting to research this theme but also It was very hard because I needed to read many English documents. I dedicated 4 months to do my thesis. (I delived in a correct term?) and they gave me a date on which I should do my exposition. I was very nervous but I did it very well and my thesis was valued with a 9,5/10. I´m so proud of myself because I think that my efforts gave results.
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The thesis

In my university, when the people are in the last grade they have to do a final thesis. If you do not pass the thesis you can´t get the titration. In my case, I have to did my thesis about a period of history that I prefer because I studied History. I chose the Spanish civil war and its relationship with the United States. It was so interesting to research about this theme but it is also very hard because I needed to prepare many English documents. I dedicated 4 mouth to do my thesis. I delived    ??? in a correct term and they gave me a date who I´m going to do  for my exposition. I was very nervous but I did very well and my thesis was valued with a 9,5/10. I´m so proud of myself because I think that my efforts was  yielded results.


Just a few mistakes, otherwise was brilliant, good luck :)

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