cat cafe
Today,I went to the cat cafe with my friend.
It was very nice place.I think that if you love cats,it is worth visiting for you. There were over 20 cats there.And you can touch them as much as desired.
But if you too touch cats will be angry or irritated and run away.So don't touch too much.
It was really really good place!!
Please try to visit!!!
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cat cafe
Today,I went to the cat cafe with my friend.It was a very nice place.I think that if you love cats, it is worth visiting for you (1). There were over 20 cats there.And you can touch them as much as desired (2).
But if you too touch too much, the (3) cats will be/ get angry or irritated and run away.So don't touch too much.
It was really really good place!!
Please try to visit!!!
Comments:
(1) "it is worth visiting for you" --> "It's worth visiting" --> Implies that 'you' should consider going there. You don't need 'for you' for the sentence to make sense
(2) "as much as desired" = Is correct, another more common way is = "as much as you want" or "as much as you desire"
(3) Too touch --> I re-arranged the words, in this context, 'touch too much' is better. "Too touch" = doesn't make sense, 'too' = means in addition, as well (also), or excessively doing something. Touch is just a verb. You could of said:
"But if you excessively touch, the cats...." --> This is correct! Excessively = too much
Hope this helps
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cat cafe
Today, I went to the Cat Cafe with my friend.It was very nice place. I think that if you love cats, it is worth visiting for you (or : it would be worth visiting for you). There were over 20 cats there. And you can touch them as much as desired.
But if you too touch cats too much, they will become angry or irritated and run away. So don't touch them too much.
It was really really good place!!
Please try to visit!!!
Keep up the good work
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