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My favorite sequence in Star Wars: The Force Awakens (part 1) Let me tell you about one of my favorite sequences in Star Wars: The Force Awakens. It's when Kylo Ren stops a blaster bolt in mid-air by using the Force. In a village on Jakku, just after Kylo Ren killed Lor San Tekka, Poe the Resistance pilot fired a blaster against Kylo Ren. However, Kylo Ren instantly stretched out of his hand towards the blaster bolt and made it froze in the air. When I first saw this scene in a theater, I was so impressed. What an interesting way of the Force! And, look at that visual effect! I watched it in IMAX 3D, so it looked like the blaster bolt was right in front of my eyes! Although that was a quite short moment, the impact that hit on me was amazingly strong. I found that this new villain, Kylo Ren, was not only a creepy, intimidating figure but also a powerful Force user. Actually, I watched the film three times in theaters and now I can see it at home anytime I want to, but this scene never bores me.

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My favorite sequence in Star Wars: The Force Awakens (part 1)

Let me tell you about one of my favorite sequences in Star Wars: The Force Awakens.
It's when Kylo Ren stops a blaster bolt in mid-air by using the Force.
In a village on Jakku, just after Kylo Ren killed Lor San Tekka, Poe the Resistance pilot fired a blaster against Kylo Ren. However, Kylo Ren instantly stretched out of his hand towards the blaster bolt and made it froze freeze in the air. When I first saw this scene in a the theater, I was so impressed. What an interesting way of using the Force! And, look at that visual effect! I watched it in IMAX 3D, so it looked like the blaster bolt was right in front of my eyes! Although that was a quite a short moment, the impact that hit it had on me was amazingly strong. I found that this new villain, Kylo Ren, was not only a creepy, intimidating figure but also a powerful Force user.
Actually, I watched the film three times in theaters and now I can see it at home anytime I want to, but this scene never bores me.

Wow! You did a great job just a couple of words needing changing but near perfect! Great job! I have also seen 'The Force Awakens.' :)   

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My favorite sequence in Star Wars: The Force Awakens (part 1)

Let me tell you about one of my favorite sequences in Star Wars: The Force Awakens.
It's when Kylo Ren stops a blaster bolt in mid-air by using the Force.
In a village on Jakku, just after Kylo Ren killed Lor San Tekka, Poe the Resistance pilot fired a blaster against at Kylo Ren. However, Kylo Ren instantly stretched out of his hand towards the blaster bolt and made it froze freeze in the air. When I first saw this scene in a theater, I was so impressed. What an interesting way of to use the Force! And, look at that visual effect! I watched it in IMAX 3D, so it looked like the blaster bolt was right in front of my eyes! Although that was a quite a short moment, the impact that hit it had on me was amazingly strong. I found that this new villain, Kylo Ren, was not only a creepy, intimidating figure but also a powerful Force user.
Actually, I watched the film three times in theaters and now I can see it at home anytime I want to, but this scene never bores me.
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I loved this movie scene too Yuka! Kylo Ren is so powerful in using the force to control physical things, but it seems like his mind is also so vulnerable when it comes to other people.

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