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My special late April Fool’s Day--Find the key (我迟到的特别愚人节) (note:大家好,我在学习英文,我用了中文对照的方式写的,但是只是意译,并不是直译,希望能大家帮助改进。能用正确地道的英文,而不是中国式英语的方式。谢谢。 Hello, everyone, I am learning English, I used the English and Chinese in the way of writing, but just free translation, not literal translation,.& hoping to get help to improve . So that i can use the correct real English, but not the chinglish . thank you) As well known,April Fool’s day comes from western to China. 众所周知,愚人节是从西方传到中国的日子。 When i first heard it, i was thinking “that is must interesting.” 当我第一次听到它时,我就想,这一定很有趣。 And i always want to do some prank,however,it never actually implements 此次,我一直想在这一天对朋友们做些恶作剧,但是从来没有实施过。 This year ,i received a special “gift” in 2n April. 今年的四月二日,我收到了特殊的”礼物” I think it is my different Fool’s Day. 我想这就是我的不同的愚人节。 Let’s start from beginning. In that day, i was eating my lunch.Then, i got a call from my mom.She said that she lost her key and wanted me helping her find it. OK, I was looking for it in anywhere which is the place it could be appeared .But meanwhile, i was thinking,”She just could not find it for a little while, it couldn’t lost” During this ten minutes, i received 5 calls from her. She was anxious.In her last call ,she told me that maybe the key was thrown with those garbage. OMG, That means i had to rummage dustbin for that key. “really? No, today is 2nd April not 1st. It’s not fool’s day! It must be my punishment,because of my prank thoughts. “ i was thinking. Anyway ,i changed my clothes ,went down outside,and looking for it. Luckily, the temperature was not hot in spring. And finally, i found it. This is my special April Fool’s Day. I hope not happened again.! 让我们从头说起,那天,我正吃着午饭,接到了我妈妈的电话。她说她丢了钥匙,要我帮她去找。好吧,我找了它能出现的任何地方。但同时,我想“也许他只是暂时找不到,反正不可能弄丢。” 在这十分钟的时间里,老妈打来了5次电话,很是着急。最后的一次电话里,她告诉我,也许钥匙和垃圾一起扔掉了。天啊,这就意味着,我要翻遍垃圾箱去找这个要是。 “真的?今天可不是四月一日愚人节,今天是四月二日。这一定是我总想着去整别人才得到的惩罚。” 我想,不管怎样,我还是换了衣服,下楼到外面,去翻垃圾箱了。还好,现在是春天,气温不是很热。最终,我找到了他。 这就我特殊的迟到的愚人节,我希望再也不要发生了!

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My Special, Albeit Late-- April Fools’ Day--Finding the Key

Hello, everyone!  I am learning English.  Here, I freely translated Chinese.  I would appreciate your help to improve my English, so that I can stop using “Chinglish.”  Thank you.

As is well known, April Fools’ Day came to China from the West.  When I first heard of it, I thought, “this is most interesting.”  Since then, I have always wanted to prank someone.  However, I never actually have.

This year, April Fools’ Day came a bit late for me.  I received a special “gift” on April 2nd. Let me start from beginning…

While I was eating lunch that day, my mom called to say that she lost her key and wanted my help to find it.  I then began looking for it everywhere I could think of. I believed, however, that she simply misplaced it and that it was not lost.

During the next 10 minutes, she called me five times.  During the last call, she anxiously told me that she thought the key might have been accidentally thrown out with the garbage.  Thus, I was destined to rummage through a dustbin for the lost key.  How could this be?  It was April 2nd, not April Fools’ Day.  Perhaps I was being punished because of secret desire to prank someone.

I accepted my lot, changed my clothes and went outside to look for it.  Luckily, because it is spring, the temperature was not hot.  Soon thereafter, I found it!  This was how I spent April 2nd, my "special" April Fools’ Day.  I hope this never happens again!

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My Delayed Special April Fools' Day--Finding the Key (我迟來的特别愚人节)


Hello, everyone,

   I am learning the writing in English. I wrote it both in English and Chinese, but it was just translated in meaning, not a literal translation. I hope to get some help to improve it. so that I can speak natural, real English rather than the Chinglish. Thank you.
  大家好,我在学习英文寫作。我用了中英对照的方式写的,但是只是意译,并不是直译。希望大家能帮助改进,使我能用正确地道的英文,而不是中国式英语的方式学习。谢谢。

 As well known, April Fools' day comes from the western to China.
众所周知,愚人节是从西方传到中国的節日子。
When I first heard it, I was thinking “that is would be interesting.”
当我第一次听到它时,我就想,这一定很有趣。
And I always wanted to do play some pranks on my friends on that day, however but it has never been actually carried out implements.
此次我一直想在这一天对朋友们做些恶作剧,但是从来没有实施过。
This year, I received a special “gift” on in 2n April second.
今年的四月二日,我收到了特殊的”礼物”
I think it was my different April Fools' Day.
我想这就是我的不同的愚人节。
 

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