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Argentina flagTais Gibert
My Birthday Today is my birthday. I'm very happy because of that :) I woke up late, and I had breakfast. After that i cleaned my room and I waited for my grandparents arrived. then we saw my presents, they were great!! I hope you can correct me, Esta es mi primera entrada! Best Wishes: Tais

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My Birthday

Today is my birthday. I'm very happy because of that :)
I woke up late and I had breakfast.
After that I cleaned my room and I waited for my grandparents arrived.*
then we saw my presents, they were great!!

I hope you can correct me, Esta es mi primera entrada!
Best Wishes: Tais

Very well written!

*one can also say 'I waited for my grandparents to arrive' or ''I waited for my grandparents' arrival'' although the first of these is better.

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My Birthday

Today is my birthday. I'm (in any case, that it is formal text; you should know that you shouldn't use contractions) very happy because of that :)
I woke up late, and I had breakfast.
After that I cleaned my room and I waited for my grandparents till they arrived.
Then I saw my presents, they were great!!

I hope you can correct me, Esta es mi primera entrada!
Best Wishes : Tais


It is good. Just you should try to develop your ideas in your text. And I would mention it, that a text like this for a teenager at you age and written in second language; is very good.

Keep up good work

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My Birthday

Today is my birthday. Because it is my birthday, I'm very happy. because of that :)
I woke up late, and then I had breakfast.
After that I cleaned my room and I waited for my grandparents to arrive. d
Then I we saw my presents, they were great! !

I hope you can correct me, Esta es mi primera entrada!
Best wishes: Tais




Happy birthday Tais!

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Happy birthday to you :)
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Happy birthday.

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