Modern medicine helps to live a longer life. Do you agree?
I strongly disagree. In my view, although modern medicine is convenient, the great leap in human life span has more to do with ensuring the fundamental needs such as shelter and nutrition; and less to do with advanced science.
Modern medicine may be helpful to cure lung or skin cancer but it is always way better and easier prevent those terrible sicknesses in the first place. To put it differently, modern medicine is handy for ameliorating quality of live but not for increasing live span itself. For example, improving the sight of our elders with an operation or even numbing the pain of an illness.
Above all, individual differences and lifestyle are an important factor to bear in mind. Accordingly, it is easy noticeable a difference between men and women.
In conclusion, human begins since prehistory have a limited natural longevity and could potentially pass away aged. But nowadays, due to modern medicine, nutrition, and other health care activities, it is becoming the norm, a right, and not a privilege.
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Modern medicine helps to live a longer life. Do you agree?
I strongly disagree. In my view, although modern medicine is convenient, the great leap in human life span has more to do with ensuring the fundamental needs such as shelter and nutrition; and less to do with advanced science.Modern medicine may be helpful to cure lung or skin cancer but it is always way better and easier to prevent those terrible sicknesses in the first place. To put it differently, modern medicine is handy for ameliorating quality of live but not for increasing life span itself. For example, improving the sight of our elders with an operation or even numbing the pain of an illness.
Above all, individual differences and lifestyle are an important factor to bear in mind. Accordingly, it is easily noticeable to differentiate between men and women.
In conclusion, human beings since prehistory have a limited natural longevity and could potentially pass away aged. But nowadays, due to modern medicine, nutrition, and other health care activities, it is becoming the norm, a right, and not a privilege.
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