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Accomplishing
My Dreams
When I was
a child, I had dreams as all any children have. but However, unlike to other children, (It is a little confusing. Try to
explain differently) I wanted to be rich and I wanted a motorbike,.I knew that anybody
nobody will would give it to me, so I would have to work hard. I dreamed
with a this motorbike because I loved it and I really wanted it.
When I was
14 years old, I began to working
in a restaurant on weekends and I had in my mind that with that working
there I would obtain afford the motorbike, but sadly, I was wrong because
my salary was insignificant. So, after Afterwards, when I finished my
studies in the school I worked all days ( Do you mean that you started working fulltime or every
day?) at the restaurant to obtain more money. I worked approximately 5
months until complete the money being able to save enough money to buy
the motorbike.
Finally, I
had enough money to buy the motorbike. What do you think was the first thing I
did? Of course! I bought my first motorbike. It was a blue Yamaha RX 115. This motorbike for me meant happiness,
liberty, love, passion, entertainment, and much more. I felt that my motorbike
was like a perfect girlfriend because it doesn’t put problems (Put problems
where? Try to say this same sentence in another way. Maybe: “I felt that my
motorbike would be my girlfriend because it was simpler than a woman.” Or something
like that!), it doesn’t discuss like
one. so, for me it was perfect, I think that in my life it had been
the better moment for me I think that it was the best moment of my life.
I think
that my motorbike is fantastic, although I have another motorbike, always I
will think that the motorbikes are excellent and it is more than a simple
vehicle. Finally, now, I want a big motorbike to travel around my country and
maybe around the world, but, the important point is that I have a motorbike, I
kept my first dream, now I’m struggling to comply accomplish my second dream,
I will be rich.
Complying Fulfilling the Dreams
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