Apology letters (I would like anyone to correct it. Thanks.)
Ms. Jane Harris,
I was surprised to head that you do not receive your order placed on 28 August yet. I am so sorry to inconveniences caused by this delay.
I wound like to apologize for have not been available last week, I was being in a business trip. With reference to delay in your order I wound like to explain that your order has been send on time but, the carriage do not depend on me. I has spoken with transport company and they said me that they had lot your box.
Although it is difficult to compensate you for the inconveniences suffered, I would like you to accept a new shipping. I will send your products again in a express shipping so you will receive your products within 48 hours, also I would like to offer to you by way of compensation 25% off in your next order.
I would like to apologize again, and can assure you that such situations will not occur in the future, I have changed transport company.
Yours sincerely,
Alan Bennet.
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Apology letters (I would like anyone to correct it. Thanks.)
Dear Ms. Jane Harris,I was surprised to hear that you did not receive your order placed on 28 August yet. I am so sorry for the inconvenience caused by this delay.
I would like to apologize for not being available last week. I was on a business trip. With reference to the delay in your order, I would like to explain that your order was sent on time but, the actual delivery did not depend on me. I have spoken with the transport company and they told me that they lost your box.
Although it is difficult to compensate you for the inconvenience suffered, I would like you to accept a replacement order. I will send your products again via express shipping so you will receive your products within 48 hours. Also, I would like to offer to you by way of compensation 25% off on your next order.
I would like to apologize again, and can assure you that such situations will not occur in the future. I have changed the transport company.
Yours sincerely,
Alan Bennet.
*******I left transport company in your essay because I have a feeling you might be learning British English (phrasing). We would say transportation company or shipping company in North America. On the whole a very good letter with just a few minor corrections!!!!! Keep up the good work
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Overall comment: your vocabulary is quite good but the grammar is lagging behind it. For a more balanced language skill set you should consider studying some more with grammar workbooks (e.g. Murphy or a good reference with exercises written in you native language)
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Apology letters (I would like anyone to correct it. Thanks.)
Ms. Jane Harris,I was surprised to head hear that you do did not receive (you need to use past tense here) your order placed on 28 August yet. I am so sorry to for (to be sorry for something) inconveniences the inconvenience (inconvenience is pretty much never used in plural) caused by this delay.
I wound like to apologize for have not been not being (as you are describing a state, the -ing form should be used) available last week, I was being in on a business trip. With reference to delay in your order I wound would like to explain that your order has been send sent on time but, the carriage delivery does not depend on me. I has have spoken with the transport company and they said told me that they had lost your box.
Although it is difficult to compensate you for the inconveniences suffered, I would like you to accept a new shipping. I will send your products again in a by express shipping so you will receive your products within 48 hours, also I would like to offer to you by way of compensation 25% off in on your next order.
I would like to apologize again, and can assure you that such situations will not occur in the future, as I have changed the transport company.
Yours sincerely,
Alan Bennet.
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Apology letters (I would like anyone to correct it. Thanks.)
Dear Ms. Jane Harris,I was surprised to head hear that you do did not receive your order placed on 28 August yet. I am so sorry to inconveniences for the inconvenience caused by this delay.
I wound would like to apologize for have having not been available last week, I was being on in a business trip. With reference to the delay in your order, I wound would like to explain that your order has been send sent on time but, the carriage delivery does do not depend on me. I has spoken with the transport company and they said me that they had lot your box.have your goods (this does not make sense)
Although it is difficult to compensate you for the inconveniences suffered, I would like you to accept a new shipping. I will send your products again in a express shipping so you will receive your products within 48 hours, also I would like to offer to you by way of compensation 25% off in your next order.
I would like to apologize again, and can assure you that such situations will not occur in the future, I have changed the transport company.
Yours sincerely,
Alan Bennet.
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Generally correct. Be careful with the articles, you have tendency to miss 'the'. Look forward to more of your writings.
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