My history with english. TEXT 2 DAY 01/04 *correct me, please*
Hi everyone, today I'll write about my love for music. I start college 2 months ago, I'm doing civil engineering that is a course wonderful, I really like this. But, I think that if I dont needed money to live (like if my family were rich) probably my profession would be a musician. I dont remember when I start to listen music, but it was a long time ago.
Here in my country -brazil- we've a lot of great kind of music, like "música popular brasileira", "samba" and "chorinho". About music that isn't originally from brazil, I like rock (all of the variations), jazz, blues, a few of pop and anothers stuffs like that.
I start to play acoustic guitar 3 years ago but I stop b'cuz of school/college, but I hope that I'll back to play.
please correct me!
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My history with english. TEXT 2 DAY 01/04 *correct me, please*
Hi everyone, today I'll write about my love for music. I started college 2 months ago, I'm coursing/getting a degree on civil engineering which is a wonderful course, I really like it. But, I think that if I didn't need money to live (like if my family were rich) probably my profession would be a musician. I dont remember when I started to listen to music, but that was a long time ago.Here in my country, Brazil, we've many great genres of music, like "música popular brasileira", "samba" and "chorinho". About music that isn't originally from brazil, I like rock (all of the variations), jazz, blues, some pop and other genres.
I start playing acoustic guitar 3 years ago but I stopped b'cuz of school/college, but I hope that I'll go back to playing it.
Pay attention.
When you listen, you listen TO something.
When you start, you start DOING something.
Negative past is done by adding ''didn't'' followed by the normal verb form. Ex: I didn't have
Saying ''Kinds'' of music is alright, but ''Genre'' sounds a lot better.
Nice work, anyway.
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My history with english. TEXT 2 DAY 01/04 *correct me, please*
Hi everyone, today I'll write about my love for music. I started college 2 months ago. I'm doing civil engineering, which that is a wonderful course wonderful. I really like this am really enjoying it. But I think that if I dont didn't needed money to live (like if my family were rich) probably my profession would be a musician. I don't remember when I started to listening to music, but it was a long time ago.Here in my country - Brazil - we've a lot of great kinds of music, like "música popular brasileira", "samba" and "chorinho". As far as music from elsewhere is concerned, I like rock (all types of the variations), jazz, blues and some few of pop and anothers other stuffs like that.
I started to play playing acoustic guitar 3 years ago but I stopped b'cuz because of school/college, but I hope that I'll go back to playing.
please correct me!
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Actually the name of this text is "My love for music" Im sorr,y guys.
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