One day of my life
"Today, I woke up at half past five o'clock. I turned on my computer to log in the italki.
Suddenly, i received the messenger of a new friend. I had a new friend again. I was very happy cause of that.
I went to say something with her but she was not online.
I was too enthusiastic about that so i promised my exercise in the morning.
At seven o'clock I went to the national library by bus. Do you want to see the national library in Vietnam?
I was at there until six pm and then I took bus to go my home."
It was today of mine. Because my vocabulary is not good so i can only say that. If the passage has errors, can you correct for me.
Thank you so much !
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One day of A day in my life
"Today, I woke up at half past five o'clock. I turned on my computer to log in the to italki.Suddenly, i I received the messenger of a message from a new friend. I had a new friend again. I was very happy because of that.
I went wanted to say something with to her, but she was not online.
I was too so enthusiastic about that it, so i I promised myself that I would contact her exercise in the morning.
At seven o'clock, I went to the national library by bus. Do you want to see the national library in Vietnam?
I was at there until six pm, and then I took a bus to go my back home."
It was today of mine. ?????? Because my vocabulary is not very good, so i can only say that. If I hope that if the passage has any errors, can you will correct them for me.
Thank you so much !
^ ^!
nguyen lan anh: Very good, although I didn't understand what you meant by " It was today of mine" Perhaps you meant "it was my day, today"?
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One day of my life
Today, I woke up at half past five. I turned on my computer to log in to italki.Suddenly, i received a message from of a new friend. I had a new friend again. I was very happy because of that.
I wanted to say something to her but she was not online.
I was so enthusiastic about it, so what did I do? I did my exercise in the morning.
At seven o'clock I went to the national library by bus. Do you want to see the national library in Vietnam?
I was at there until six pm and then I took bus back home.
This happened today. Because my vocabulary is not good so I can only say that. If the passage has errors, can you correct them for me.
Thank you so much !
^ ^!
Very well written; everything was clear.
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