A Persuasive paragraph
Is very important to help the planet because is our house and there are many wait that you can use to save the planet
FOR EXAMPLE :
1) Rather than using your car to go to work, you can take the bus because cars smoke contaminated the enviroment.
2) You can save energy in your house turn off your tv, computers and regular light buls when you are not in your house.
3) Instead of staying at home we can clean the city in small group for day because we can avoid the contamination in our city.
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A Persuasive Paragraph
Is very important to help the planet because is our home, and there are many ways that you can help save the planet.FOR EXAMPLE :
1) Rather than using your car to go driving your car to work, you can take the bus because cars' smoke contaminates the environment.
2) You can save energy in your house by turning off your tv, computers, and regular light bulbs when you are not in your house.
3) Instead of staying at home we can clean the city in small groups for the day because we can to avoid the contaminating in our city.
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A Persuasive Paragraph......
Is very important to help the planet because is our home, and there are many ways that you can help save the planet.
FOR EXAMPLE :
1) Rather than driving your car to work, you can take the bus because cars' smoke contaminatesthe environment.
2) You can save energy in your house by turning off your tv, computers, and regular light bulbs when you are not in your house.
3) Instead of staying at home we can clean the city in small groups for the day to avoid contaminating our city.
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