My vacation - Chinese
我去了一趟Orlando(奥兰多)。我去过Orlando 之前。我跟我的家一起去的。我们坐开车去的。我们去travel的。第一天在Orlando， 我们去了Disney。那天晚上我们去了Forrest Gump 餐厅。第二天，我们去了Universal Studios。第四天我们去买衣服，我买衬衫和裤子的。
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My vacation - Chinese
我去了一趟Orlando(奥兰多)。我去过Orlando 之前。(The right: 我之前去过Orlando or 我曾经去过Orlando。In Chinese, usually the modifiers are in front of being modified words. )我跟我的家一起去的。( 我跟我的家人一起去的。"家人"mean family members, "家" means all your family, may include the house you lived in with some context)
我们坐开车去的。(我们开车去的。坐车, you take a bus; 开车, you drive your own car or the car you borrowed)
我们去travel的。(我们是去旅游的）
第一天在Orlando， 我们去了Disney。那天晚上我们去了Forrest Gump 餐厅。第二天，我们去了Universal Studios。第四天我们去买衣服，我买衬衫和裤子的。（我买了衬衫和裤子, "了" mean something happened in the past. Just like 买-buy, 买了-bought)
Although there are some problems, but as a native Chinese I can catch what you want to say.
My English is so so and need to improve too. I do hope friends can correct my mistakes.
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My vacation - Chinese
我去了一趟Orlando(奥兰多)。我去过Orlando 之前我之前去过Orlando。我跟我的家人一起去的。我们坐开车去的。（坐车by car，开车 drive car）我们去travel的。第一天在Orlando， 我们去了Disney。那天晚上我们去了Forrest Gump 餐厅。第二天，我们去了Universal Studios。第四天我们去买衣服，我买衬衫和裤子的。Want to progress faster?
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